Open Poetry #28 |
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breathe... |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA ![]() |
jagged little insecurities pierce my reality sometimes I forget how to breathe a simple act but sometimes I have to force myself to close my eyes and tell myself to relax relate release... If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. [This message has been edited by Ceinwyn (09-18-2003 10:12 AM).] |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Ceinwyn - breathing is good, and a good write... BC |
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Bonfirelight Member
since 2003-06-19
Posts 85London, England |
Cool write. |
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KristieSue![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
I say that ALLLLL the freakin' time! LOL love it.... "Vision without action is a daydream. Action without vision is a nightmare." -Japanese Proverb |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I forget to breathe too! All of a sudden I'll take a huge gasping intake of air and realize that I had stopped breathing for awhile! That's when I relax, go within and release the tension--and start deep breathing! I totally identified with this terrific little write! ![]() Happy breathing! Linda ![]() |
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PouringJewels Member
since 2003-09-18
Posts 158Maryland |
Exactly how I feel tonight. Couldn't have worded better. Jewels |
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bsquirrel![]()
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
I think "relate" is the key to this'un. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
The three r's... and how wise they are! Well done, Ceinwyn! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"relax relate release..." I should have these three words written on my hand...LOL. I need to just stop and breathe more often. Wonderful write..much enjoyed. ~Hugs~
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mytuesdaywishes Member
since 2003-09-05
Posts 254a voice from the musicbox |
i know the feeling. i used to write to be sane too, but then i figured out that everyone else was wrong. :Þ keep writing, its great. and even when everything was wrong, and we were mad at the world, it was still beautiful. |
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