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Ceinwyn
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0 posted 2003-09-18 10:11 AM



jagged little
insecurities
pierce my reality
sometimes
I forget
how to
breathe
a simple act
but sometimes
I have
to force
myself
to
close
my
eyes
and
tell myself
to
relax
relate
release...




If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

[This message has been edited by Ceinwyn (09-18-2003 10:12 AM).]

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Bill Charles
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1 posted 2003-09-18 11:00 AM


Ceinwyn - breathing is good, and a good write...

BC

Bonfirelight
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2 posted 2003-09-18 01:16 PM


Cool write.

KristieSue
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3 posted 2003-09-18 01:44 PM


I say that ALLLLL the freakin' time! LOL

love it....

"Vision without action is a daydream.  Action without vision is a nightmare." -Japanese Proverb
~ KS

Earth Angel
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4 posted 2003-09-18 03:17 PM


I forget to breathe too! All of a sudden I'll take a huge gasping intake of air and realize that I had stopped breathing for awhile! That's when I relax, go within and release the tension--and start deep breathing!

I totally identified with this terrific little write!

Happy breathing!
Linda

PouringJewels
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5 posted 2003-09-18 04:45 PM


Exactly how I feel tonight.

Couldn't have worded better.


Jewels

bsquirrel
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6 posted 2003-09-18 06:49 PM


I think "relate" is the key to this'un.
Sunshine
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7 posted 2003-09-18 06:54 PM



The three r's...
and how wise they are!

Well done, Ceinwyn!

Enchantress
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8 posted 2003-09-18 06:57 PM


"relax
relate
release..."

I should have these three words written on my hand...LOL.
I need to just stop and breathe more often.
Wonderful write..much enjoyed.
~Hugs~


~ I love your glances meeting mine
     across forever or the room ~

mytuesdaywishes
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9 posted 2003-09-18 10:17 PM


i know the feeling. i used to write to be sane too, but then i figured out that everyone else was wrong. :Þ keep writing, its great.

and even when everything was wrong, and we were mad at the world, it was still beautiful.

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