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Open Poetry #28

Oh-Dark-Thirty [Storm]

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2003-09-18 08:55 AM

Light, piercing curtains
Ballerinas ~*~ ~*~ pirouette
Thunderous applause

[This message has been edited by Sunshine (09-18-2003 08:55 AM).]

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2003-09-18 09:02 AM

Sunshine
Beautiful,

Enchantress
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Canada eh.

2 posted 2003-09-18 09:03 AM

Excellent!! Much enjoyed.
Storms and hurricanes do inspire!
~Hugsm Nancy~

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

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USA

3 posted 2003-09-18 09:57 AM

very nice

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

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Louisiana

4 posted 2003-09-18 11:01 AM

I couldn't resist the title... that's a real time designation where I come from. *S*

This is beautiful, Sunshine... well done! *S*

MorninGlory
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since 2003-08-30

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Oklahoma

5 posted 2003-09-18 11:09 AM

Lovely, my friend!! It is a piece of art indeed. You've got style!

~ becky

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

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Eternity

6 posted 2003-09-19 07:34 AM

That's indeed a very poetic interpretation of the storm!
Love, Margherita

icebox
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since 2003-05-03

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in the shadows

7 posted 2003-09-19 07:45 AM

Nice work!

Pilgrimage
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Texas, USA

8 posted 2003-09-19 09:49 AM

I enjoyed this one-I've seen that.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

Martie

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California

9 posted 2003-09-19 10:18 AM

Karilea....Beautifully done, my friend!

Nightshade

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just out of reach

10 posted 2003-09-19 10:23 AM

Awesome thoughts dear lady !!
hugs, Chris

Let your life lightly dance on the edges of Time like dew on the tip of a leaf. -Tagore

Robert Frazier
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since 2003-02-06

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11 posted 2003-09-19 10:33 AM

Lightening clapping ovations!

Rf

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