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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Until... In morning darkness Isabel's tears building up Her power yet seen Reaching out to touch Nature's strength making landfall Tiding those in way To be with, without Old and young to stand their ground Until wind brings down M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
no one can predict nature, or where she strikes the hardest, and yet, there is still so much beauty in her emotions...her breath of life, shortlived... Beautiful words and write, thank you |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Oh...well done nakdthoughts. In morning darkness Isabel's tears building up Her power yet seen This opening is fantastic. When I realized you were referring to the hurricane I said...darn that is clever. Comapring the force and fury of the storm to tears. Oh how I wish I'd thought that up. Excellent piece. Keep 'em coming! |
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Bonfirelight Member
since 2003-06-19
Posts 85London, England |
Nice one. captured that pensive feeling well. Good luck to all in the path of the storm. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
WynterGal~ You write the fury well ... hoping you aren't one of the nearly 3/4 million without power~  Praying you safe keep~  *Huglets* ~*Margge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
we haven't gotten the full force of the rain and winds yet..we have till sometime in the early morning but the winds are howling and the rains are stinging...it's only the beginning. But I am well prepared...and I spent the evening yesterday and the day today putting everything away from outside and tieing things down...branches and leaves are flying everywhere. It's just a waiting game now. It hits Baltimore around midnight...then us. thanks and hugssss M |
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