Open Poetry #28 |
Attitude |
green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Strength and power Try not to exist Develope a sense of domination A following and heiarchy That wretched display of poverty Disection of politics Importance Dwindle Spirit of my own Lead a journey Straight with no reverse Crawl forward Distraction discontent Discord and disruption Heavy stand Then dictate Circle of stars Angles submission Hear me say, Following ---------------------------- This feels like crap. Please give a sugestion. a trickle of music from a well |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
Hmmm will have to think on this, but I do believe this holds something. Crystal |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
you leaving us in dark..sniff(lol), anyways this was o.k. by your standards, i am gonna give it some more time and get back to you, i can't quite see it yet, it is by no means bad, just not up to par... "For those who understand you, no explanation is necessary. For those who don't, none is possible." |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Yeah I have to agree this could have been alot better and I should have put more thought into it. And no Im not leaving dark. Im just "expanding" my horizons. a trickle of music from a well |
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