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Open Poetry #28

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Jason Lyle
Senior Member

since 2003-02-07

Posts 1438
With my darkling

0 posted 2003-09-17 11:42 PM

I had warned you once
weakness will feel like power
and we will both lose

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

1 posted 2003-09-17 11:52 PM

The title drew me in as I lost a bet monday because I gave a three point spread...*sigh*

Very nicely done!

Susan

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

2 posted 2003-09-17 11:59 PM

you're right nobody wins in these situations

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

3 posted 2003-09-18 12:05 PM

Very wise words, Jason. Well said.
Hugs,
~Vicky
When the power of love overcomes the
love of power the world will know peace.
-Jimi Hendrix

angelblueyes
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

4 posted 2003-09-18 02:03 AM

Truthful words.Hopefully some will listen.

Crystal

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

5 posted 2003-09-19 06:44 PM

ahh yes, yes Jason
nicely said indeed
xxoo

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