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Misunderstanding
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Misunderstanding |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Misunderstanding I invited myself somewhere I wasn’t welcomed and tried to give you an unwanted gift imagine my surprise "I am living a life, i have no wish to live. How did this happen?" Unknown |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
*sigh.. I know this. |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
well I'm surprised that anyone would turn you down. Sad, good. "Vision without action is a daydream. Action without vision is a nightmare." -Japanese Proverb |
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alisa Member
since 2003-08-20
Posts 70Florida |
wow, i think this is really really good, but also sad...... |
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James_A_Fraser Senior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 972Out Making Anticlines |
I can't imagine a place where you wouldn't be wanted, or a gift of yours that wouldn't be welcome. And I can't imagine a place where you wouldn't be welcome, or a gift of yours that wouldn't be wanted. Sweet little poem, written so transparently that the reader sees only the subject and the person who wrote it, not the words. |
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mytuesdaywishes Member
since 2003-09-05
Posts 254a voice from the musicbox |
been there, done that. and it always hurts. if your recipient had perhaps seen you, really seen you and what you stand for, they might had reconsidered. hence the age old phrase: it's the thought that counts. thanks for sharing the thought. and even when everything was wrong, and we were mad at the world, it was still beautiful. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Ah know this but he doesn't know what he gave up..friggin tool |
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