Open Poetry #28 |
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arthur Senior Member
since 2001-08-14
Posts 678england |
Wife Now my journey nears its end. How quickly the time has flown Gone now my joy,my love ,my friend The wife I called my own. We walked together on lifes hill But now I must walk alone Yet you my dear are with me still Sweetheart,I am so nearly home arthur |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
arthur No added words could make it any better. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Perfect! Hauntingly sad...yet lovely in it's brevity. ~Hugs across the pond, Nancy~
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Michael~ This is so poignantly tender~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
This one made me tear up. Sorry to get weepy on you, but this is so affecting. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Arthur, this is so touching... I wish you well...and I wish you peace. |
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Bonnie j Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588Ohio |
I'll share this verse with you. You may keep this if you wish. Love Bon-Bon Remember Me Remember me when I leave and go beneath the darkened earth in quiet sleep. Remember that it is only for a little while, just the blink of an eye. Remember my laughter, not my pain. Remember my smile, not my tears. Remember my gentle ways, not my anger and frustration. Remember, “I Love You,” and one day, I will return to your arms and loving embrace. Remember when we meet again, there will be no pain or sorrow only peace and happiness. Remember Me |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
May the remainder of this journey be all you can make of it and may you walk hand in hand once more in the next. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
arthur...this is very touching! |
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