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Open Poetry #28

We..umbling

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

0 posted 2003-08-06 04:14 PM

We do not change,
even as seasons pass.
We do not evolve,
wincing at the very idea, or thought.

We do not crumble, yet
cornered and disgruntled.
Stumbling into infored,
all streets illuminate
under our feet.

I know, I'm rambling,
but thinking is all I seem to do.
Every now and again all I
can think about is sharing my thoughts
with you.

But swept us up, a tornado,
grumbling and tumbling along a
scenery I thought too perfect.
A sunset I'd pictured,
burned into my memory.

Lately, I've been changing,
my perspective stolen or askew.
Melted upon a weightless
fault, that is
we..

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

1 posted 2003-08-06 04:23 PM

"Melted upon a weightless fault that is we." What a stunning conception.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

2 posted 2003-08-06 04:26 PM

Ditto the above.

Awesome!

~Tier

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2003-08-06 04:41 PM

I do believed I've umbled myself
a time or two...

Meghan, keep this up. You're rapidly
becoming one of my favored finds...

gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

4 posted 2003-08-06 04:44 PM

Lately, I've been changing,
my perspective stolen or askew

Mine was stolen. along with my frickin heart.

loving this.

Instant karma's gonna get you.

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

5 posted 2003-08-06 04:47 PM

very good thoughts,,

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