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QjQ
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since 2003-04-18
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0 posted 2003-08-05 01:42 PM




one surrenders to the other
all there love

the other takes it and uses
it till they find another

so why do we give love and
the other finds another

if this is fact why did other
take your love when they
wanted love from another



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Miah
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since 2002-08-26
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1 posted 2003-08-05 02:08 PM


Question of the ages.  Enjoyed your poem.

PS.  I had a dream about passions the other night, I remember seeing  your name, QjQ but you weren't you, you were Garth Brookes. hahah sorry, had to tell you about that.  

gemjop
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since 2002-11-18
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2 posted 2003-08-05 02:09 PM


I don't know...one of my main questions in life.

sigh.

love the way you presented these words.

but, if there are like minded people, who think the same, does it mean we stand a chance of someone truly appreciating our love? I bloody hope so.

much SINCERE love to you Q. lol
gem
xxx

Instant karma's gonna get you.

JilGirl
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since 2003-05-24
Posts 364
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3 posted 2003-08-06 02:02 AM


Great question!
May we each find that "another" one
FIRST!

Cleverly worded!

'Tiz feathers that make the bird -
Always remember to keep them fluffed
but, never, EVER ruffle them!

Kaoru
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where the wild flowers grow
4 posted 2003-08-06 02:10 AM


Q,

questions often unanswered..
sometimes I wonder if I will ever understand, myself..


inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19
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Ohio
5 posted 2003-08-06 06:57 AM


dear man,
because once the chance is over, so is the thrill,
only the rainbow stays for me these days.......................

Bill Charles
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6 posted 2003-08-06 02:50 PM


QjQ - amazing question, but so true...

BC

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
7 posted 2003-08-06 04:12 PM



Because they think they're
never too old to play games?  
Good questions...

Where're the answers?

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
8 posted 2003-08-06 05:40 PM


Some are players...they play until a new plaything catches their eye...James
SharaRose
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9 posted 2003-08-06 05:45 PM


QJQ..if you ever find out would you please
pass that on? Thanks for asking the question that burns in lots of us.

SharaRose @-->--


Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

[This message has been edited by SharaRose (08-06-2003 05:47 PM).]

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