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Open Poetry #28

.......What a Life.....

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

0 posted 2003-09-17 05:37 PM

We crooned under many moons
under stars so bright, happy we
were and could not be apart, we
stole each heart and vowed never
to part, then we took our lifetime
vows, then we played and loved
our everlasting honeymoon that
we bonded our love together,
now i ask what happen? were
not happy and we argue all the
time you say you hate me and
I say why? it's you that's always
messy with your hair never nice
and your sitting in front of the TV
all day never doing anything and
when i come home you call for
pizza because you don't cook
and last weeks dishes are still
in the sink you say you forgot to
put them in the dish washer, and
the beds never made because why
it's only going to messed up again
and you ask me for a divorce,what
nerve you have!!! goodbye!!!

MorninGlory
Member

since 2003-08-30

Posts 175
Oklahoma

1 posted 2003-09-17 06:38 PM

As long as this isn't about you, its very humorous! If it is, then I'm sooo sorry. Either way, I like it, it starts out reading just fine, then along about the middle, I started to tumble down the page, and it was a bumpy ride!! Great job!!!

~ becky

Bonnie j
Senior Member

since 2003-06-27

Posts 1588
Ohio

2 posted 2003-09-17 07:21 PM

Well Mr. Q. Are these just words of poetry?
Otherwise you sound ticked off my friend.
Hope tomorrow is a better day. Sad poem
Mr. Q.
Bon-Bon

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

3 posted 2003-09-17 07:23 PM

enjoyed

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