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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-09-17 04:35 PM

The Remains Of Something

you and I live
between dusty roads
love lost in
the piling of rocks
a storm scattering
each time crossed
of weakness broken
carried on breeze
remains of strength
outlining surfaces
powdery fears filtering
from solid silence
this dirt cloth loosely
covering past spreads
but what is the shape
of things to come
will it just be a layering
of more pounding
to where we break
through to the other side
writing our names
in shapes of the crumbling
or are we pearling
a monument to loneliness

"I am living a life, i have no wish to live. How did this happen?" Unknown

[This message has been edited by 1slick_lady (09-17-2003 04:38 PM).]

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2003-09-17 04:38 PM

"will it just be a layering
of more pounding
to where we break
through to the other side
writing our names
in shapes of the crumbling
or are we pearling
a monument to loneliness"

WOW!! Just....WOW!
~Hugs~

~ I love your glances meeting mine
across forever or the room ~

MARK V SHELDON
Member Elite

since 2001-06-21

Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...

2 posted 2003-09-17 05:00 PM

Damn, Slick! You keep getting better and better!

-MVS

You CAN make a difference:
http://educate-yourself.org/

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

3 posted 2003-09-17 06:34 PM

She defines better and better...

alisa
Member

since 2003-08-20

Posts 70
Florida

4 posted 2003-09-18 09:52 PM

they are right, you are getting better and better everyday....

you are one day closer...

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

5 posted 2003-09-18 11:57 PM

You've always been this good, and better.

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

6 posted 2003-09-18 11:59 PM

Wow -- just dunno how you do it....things like this

writing our names
in shapes of the crumbling

are so emotive, with so much of the texture of meaning....excellence!

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______________Ratleader______________

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

7 posted 2003-09-19 03:40 AM

always did love dusty roads

sigh

KristieSue

Senior Member

since 2003-01-31

Posts 1460
PA, US

8 posted 2003-09-19 06:56 AM

lol this is great!!!

"Vision without action is a daydream. Action without vision is a nightmare." -Japanese Proverb
~ KS

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