Open Poetry #28 |
No-No Nonet |
Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
No-No Nonet ~*Marge Tindal*~ Cannot say what prompted me to write Perhaps little girl needing voice No one to talk to, no choice Pour of thought on paper Quiet keep of real Discovered self Tearful shed No, oh No~ ~Yes Oh yes Tearful ink Spill of the think Seeped from depth of self Come to terms with real me No more placement on back shelf Thinking, in fact, most pleasantly Nevermore to be, No-No Nonet *It's Vicky's fault* |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Good, and interesting...and cute. Well done, Marge. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very well done Marge!! Much enjoyed..perhaps I will have a go at one. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
how nicely written,,
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I don't know whether to admire your poem or chuckle at your title... so I'll do both. *S* |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge/sis...looks like fun...and so well done! |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Smiling at you, Marge... You know I love this...and I will happily accept the 'blame' for you having written it. Love and hugs, ~Vicky When the power of love overcomes the |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Marge: Very clever and fun! Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Well how do you like that - I blame her too... This is great, Marge.. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Well, thankee elebody~ It was a fun little venture of ink~ Vickers~ Yeppers, well ... you wear it so well~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Betty Senior Member
since 2002-08-13
Posts 1159Virginia |
I like this. Betty |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
This is so cute! You're too funny-and to combine it with wisdom probably isn't fair. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Bee- -a-loo-la ! For Amepoesie in the Pub~ See what crazy fun we have ??? ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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amepoesie Member
since 2006-01-19
Posts 63Canada |
Well, I am impressed! People are talking about me everywhere here! I will be famous in now time! ;-) In any case, a great write! Ame et Poésie |
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