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garysgirl
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0 posted 2003-09-17 10:35 AM


      


He and I are hopeless romantics
Enjoying each moment we have
Together in love, are we
Happy  as  two can be
Romantics in   love
Sharing our hearts
Passionate
Tender
Love

~*~

Love
Two hearts
Become   one
Shared with a smile
Bonded        together
Such bond must never  end
We hope it won't be   broken
Being  one   for      eternity
Lasting forever and for    always



[This message has been edited by garysgirl (09-17-2003 08:19 PM).]

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1 posted 2003-09-17 10:42 AM


not only do I love the poem and the romance, I love the graphic!

I love reading your work.  Gives me hope :-)

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~ KS

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2 posted 2003-09-17 10:49 AM


Darn...well done! This particular style looks like a lot of fun to write. I really have got to try it. The grphic is really cute too. Love the piece garysgirl!
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3 posted 2003-09-17 11:00 AM



LOL...so you wrote romance in a Nonet...and you know, of course, that I was messing around and as far as I know, there IS no such thing as a Tenon [unless, of course, we can invent anything...] but I love that you took up the challenge...

and found a way to braid romance into your lines....

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4 posted 2003-09-17 11:06 AM


love it, very well done piece

Meesh

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(smiles) God Bless You, sweet friend, I just love how you continue to expand your versatility of romantic poetry with all sorts of different forms, yay! (kiss on cheek) The Nonet sure seems to be the form of the moment, hehehe, I love this, and may your hearts always be together as one, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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6 posted 2003-09-17 01:35 PM


Ethel..this is so beautiful!
Seems you have mastered yet another form.
Lovely graphic as well.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~


~ I love your glances meeting mine
     across forever or the room ~

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7 posted 2003-09-17 10:35 PM



Ethel...you've done a great job with this.
It's absolutely beautiful.
I love that you decided to give this a go,
and you pulled it off with flying colors.

Hugs to you, lady,
~Vicky

When the power of love overcomes the
love of power the world will know peace.
-Jimi Hendrix

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8 posted 2003-09-17 10:40 PM


Ethyl,  I thought all of you and your "nonets"
were insane.....

I was wrong...

Nicely done,  a very romantic way of
expressing your love...

Susan Caldwell
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9 posted 2003-09-17 10:48 PM


Ethel~

Very sweet!

Thank you for humoring the curiousity in me..I am keeping my fingers crossed for you.

Susan

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10 posted 2003-09-18 04:29 AM


Nice...James
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11 posted 2003-09-18 10:18 AM


nice write,,

                                

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12 posted 2003-09-18 10:21 AM


garysgirl - may the hearts as one love on forever...

BC

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