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THE DEEP BLUE
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THE DEEP BLUE |
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Abe Senior Member
since 2003-05-28
Posts 694Looks like Vero Beach, FL until the end! 
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THE DEEP BLUE Touching each and every shore With a soft caress. Gentle When I want to be -- The sea. Or roaring with abandon Screaming -- venting my anger At man to implore Restore My clear life-giving waters My unpolluted beaches It must be begun And done A matter of existence Not only mine -- yours too If you don't concur Be sure Across my width, breadth and depth All of us will pay, some day Your only defense? No sense! Don't wait 'til it's too late And all life is near an end Ask with your last breath -- Why death? Del "Abe" Jones [This message has been edited by Abe (09-17-2003 10:37 AM).] |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
A matter of existence Not only mine -- yours too If you don't concur Be sure Great great write, full of hope, wisdom and a care to voice opinions for the sake of mankind. Thank you |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
It seems I continually pick up after others, especially when out in the country... it's such a shame, how we treat Mother Nature... |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
I love the structure and rhyme scheme of this piece of wisdom. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Abe, this is beautifully written. I like the way you rhymed the last two lines of each verse.  hugs  Ethel |
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