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TWENTY OR LESS...#163

MARK V SHELDON
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since 2001-06-21

Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...

0 posted 2003-09-17 07:25 AM

TWENTY OR LESS…#163

Copyright 2003 by:Mark V Sheldon

Depending

on you

everything becomes confusion

this time
I will
rely
on

myself

You CAN make a difference:
http://educate-yourself.org/

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

1 posted 2003-09-17 07:31 AM

MARK V SHELDON: I like what you write !

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

2 posted 2003-09-17 07:49 AM

Yes, yes yes, I do to...very good! Good Morning

Cpat Hair

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since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

3 posted 2003-09-17 08:06 AM

(chuckling)... uh huh.... sure....

MARK V SHELDON
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since 2001-06-21

Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...

4 posted 2003-09-17 08:47 AM

Roniece Dawson-Bruce:  Thank you -- now, to practice it!

Hi LeeJ.  Ralph Waldo Emerson had it down.

Ron...  Who else then?

-MVS

You CAN make a difference:
http://educate-yourself.org/

Cpat Hair

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since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

5 posted 2003-09-17 09:04 AM

who else indeed Mark... but why is it our pronouncing we will on ourselves only depend usually is indicative of our wish to share something more with someone other than ourselves?

I have
in learned school
found my depnd on me
is to embrace
the inner fool

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2003-09-17 09:40 AM

Sometimes..
the only one
we really can
depend on...
is
ourselves.

Nicely done Mark.
~Hugs, Nancy~

~ I love your glances meeting mine
across forever or the room ~

Pilgrimage
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since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

7 posted 2003-09-17 09:52 AM

Great structure on this one, it emphasizes and reinforces the message. Don't you love these short ones?

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

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