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TWENTY OR LESS...#163
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TWENTY OR LESS...#163 |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
TWENTY OR LESS…#163 Copyright 2003 by:Mark V Sheldon Depending on you everything becomes confusion this time I will rely on myself You CAN make a difference: |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
MARK V SHELDON: I like what you write !  |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Yes, yes yes, I do to...very good! Good Morning |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
(chuckling)... uh huh.... sure.... |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Roniece Dawson-Bruce: Thank you -- now, to practice it! Hi LeeJ. Ralph Waldo Emerson had it down. Ron... Who else then? -MVS You CAN make a difference: |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
who else indeed Mark... but why is it our pronouncing we will on ourselves only depend usually is indicative of our wish to share something more with someone other than ourselves? I have in learned school found my depnd on me is to embrace the inner fool |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Sometimes.. the only one we really can depend on... is ourselves. Nicely done Mark. ~Hugs, Nancy~
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Great structure on this one, it emphasizes and reinforces the message. Don't you love these short ones? Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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