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vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

0 posted 2003-09-16 03:21 PM

Mark of moments lost in captive beat
Eerie ticking haunts the soul as
Temptress rises up in dance
Reeling in her lusting
Of lovers' rhythm
Ne'er in deny
Of dance till
Music's
End

~Vicky L. Raynes

When the power of love overcomes the
love of power the world will know peace.
-Jimi Hendrix

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2003-09-16 03:22 PM

If someone has to show off,
I'm glad it's you, because you
only set the bar higher....

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2003-09-16 03:23 PM

(smiles) Yay! Wow, I've done an acrostic before but never in the form of a nonet, this is beautiful, I love the passion flowing through this until finally emphasizing into a bang in the end! (kiss on cheek) Your poetry is always so enjoyable to read, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vicky, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2003-09-16 04:26 PM

OH WOW!! Two difficult (for me anyway) forms in one piece.
Vicky...you are amazing!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~ I love your glances meeting mine
across forever or the room ~

Toerag
Member Ascendant

since 1999-07-29

Posts 5622
Ala bam a

4 posted 2003-09-16 04:33 PM

Damn show off wimmin!!!!...LOL...good write gal...

Skyfire

Member Elite

since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

5 posted 2003-09-16 04:33 PM

hehe you're my hero Mum

Keep showing off

Life isn't really all that bad... just don't take it too seriously

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

6 posted 2003-09-16 06:08 PM

Vicker~
Just too blippin' cool~
You are really turning 'em out gal~
Proud of you, I am~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
noles1@totcon.com

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

7 posted 2003-09-16 06:10 PM

wow vicky very nice,,,,

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

8 posted 2003-09-16 06:52 PM

Beautiful Vicky . . .
passionate melodies
(I must try this)
xxoo

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

9 posted 2003-09-16 06:58 PM

Stand up and take a bow, Dear Vicky! I applaud you! This is wonderful! Two forms for the price of one!

Linda

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

10 posted 2003-09-16 07:43 PM

OK, so now here's the question! Just who the heck is Earth Angel paying if she is shelling out the coin to read two for one at the price of one? HMMMM?

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

11 posted 2003-09-16 08:40 PM

Sunshine ~

Do mean to tell me that you get to read all of Vicky's poems for free? She charges me a handsome sum--but I gladly fork it out for the privilege of reading such fine poetry! lol

EA

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

12 posted 2003-09-16 08:50 PM

Vicky, thank you dear lady for showing me a new form......
You and Karilea and some of the others make these forms
look so easy...but they sure aren't

They sure are fun to try though. I've got to figure this
kind out, though.

Ethel

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

13 posted 2003-09-17 03:59 AM

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

14 posted 2003-09-17 04:03 AM

I'm in awe..such talent

Nan

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

15 posted 2003-09-17 07:45 AM

Show off?... Nah... I expect nothing less from you... Terrible, aren't I??..

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

16 posted 2003-09-17 09:14 AM

Vicky....I love how you did this!

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

17 posted 2003-09-17 09:21 AM

Ok, EA - I need to know exactly what sum she's extracting from you, anyway. I mean, if it's food related, hey, I can come up with things like S'Mores...or nacho chips and dip...but if she's dealing in coin...well now...I'm going to have to go get my penny collection...

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

18 posted 2003-09-17 09:44 AM

Sun Ball ~

It varies! If it is a humorous poem, she likes to be paid with jelly beans. For her poems on romance, it's roses! For her dark and brooding poetry I am to pay her in happy pills. For me to be able to read her poems on day-to-day living, she demands a mess of my homemade cabbage rolls.

--and lastly, but not leastly, for the privilege of reading her intellectual/teaching poems she prefers payment in coin--and we're not talking pennies!!!

But all in all, I have found I have gotten my "money's" worth!

Love, Life & the Pursuit of Vicky's poetry!
EA

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