Open Poetry #28 |
My Heart Aches From The Missing |
garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
My heart aches from the missing of you Hurt so real, what to do I know not Phone calls never are long enough Though every single day we talk Letters every day, but can't say all we want Your touch, I miss it so very very much Your kiss, soft sweet lips touching Your hands, so loving and tender caressings Your eyes, such love I see in their soft brown Your scent, the masculine cologne, the smell of you The longing, the desire, the want of you Oh my Love, this ache of, of my heart [This message has been edited by garysgirl (09-18-2003 09:26 AM).] |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
very romantically penned,,,
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
Ethel, this is beautiful when I told the one I love that I ache for him and need to talk more he told me he didn't understand, sorry, and that he wasn't ready, wasn't willing to give up that much time.. and then, he said goodbye. I still love him... You've got a good guy there Ethel... Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
There lies pleasure in aching for the one we love! It's the declaration of love, renewed in every moment. Beautiful, dear Ethel. Love, Margherita |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
This was stunningly beautiful lady! Oh the bittersweet emotion of a love and missing them with your entire soul...feeling not quite yourself or complete without them. Big hugs sent your way, may God bless your love eternally.... |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
very sweet, very emotional, very true.... "Vision without action is a daydream. Action without vision is a nightmare." -Japanese Proverb |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Glenn, thank you. . Allysa, I'm sorry. I can feel the hurt in your words. By the way, it's good to see you here. I've missed you. . Margherita, you are right. Even through the hurt, I'm so thankful that the two of us have each other. And that we love each other so much that we do miss and ache for each other. . . I appreciate each of you. Hugs to you all Ethel |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Lee, oh yes, when we are apart, we hurt down into the core of our being for each other. But, like I said, we feel very blessed to have each other to love and miss so much. . Kristie Sue, thank you for your sweet reply. . . I appreciate both of you. Hugs Ethel |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Oh man...so sweet and full of longing! The graphic fits nicely with the poem. Well done garysgirl. Love reading your stuff. Looking forward to the next. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big angel comfort hugs) Oh Ethel, I understand ever so much how you feel, as I felt that way about my Joanna until we broke up, but know Gary will always love you and though at this moment you may be apart, the love is true and golden and very soon you will be together with him forever! (smiles) God Bless You, sweet friend, love shines in your heart, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
This is excellently penned.I wish you both the reuniting of such two blessed hearts. Crystal |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thanks, EvocativeVerse. I'm glad that you like it. . Thank you, Noah. Yes, I so believe that Gary and I will forever be together!! . Thank you, Crystal. My friend, your replies are so sweet. . . I appreciate you all, Hugs to each of you Ethel |
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