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Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

0 posted 2003-09-10 07:54 PM

Tear In Tremble
~*Marge Tindal*~

Tear in tremble
fear of fall
clings to lash
of dearest recall~

Leaps to cheek
in tender surrender
of a moment breaking
in gentle remember~

Touched by fingers
of gentleness
in this moment
of poignant caress~

Wiped away
in careless brush
Tear in tremble
too tender the rush~

*Dedicated to the overwhelming memories of those who perished*
September 11, 2001

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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Paul Wilson

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since 2002-07-07

Posts 4711
United States

1 posted 2003-09-10 08:09 PM

Marge...A beautiful tribute to those no longer with us in flesh, but always in spirit of remembrance in our hearts. Very touching words from your heart shared with us. Thanks...Paul

"To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you"

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

2 posted 2003-09-10 08:16 PM

Yes...

If you judge people, you have no time to love them.
--Mother Teresa

Spine Grinder
Senior Member

since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

3 posted 2003-09-10 08:25 PM

Wow...I really liked this....Very much so...Great job.

PS. The pic. was cool too lol

"I'm tired of being what you want me to be."~Linkin Park

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

4 posted 2003-09-10 09:16 PM

Very nice Marge. Gentle touch with words. hugs, Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers
That perches in the soul ~
Emily Dickinson

Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

5 posted 2003-09-11 12:47 PM

Dear Marge: There must be many tears in tremble tonight, as we all remember what happened two years ago and how it changed our lives. Lovely rememberance poem.

Love
Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

6 posted 2003-09-11 12:52 PM

adding mine...

SharaRose
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since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

7 posted 2003-09-11 01:37 AM

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

Patricia
Member Elite

since 2003-04-06

Posts 2160
Missouri

8 posted 2003-09-11 06:08 PM

We had a "moment of silence" and wear your red, white, and blue day at school today in their memory. Let us never forget those who perished that sorrowful day in US history.

Patricia

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

9 posted 2003-09-11 06:10 PM

enjoyed

Street Heart
Member

since 2002-09-05

Posts 349
Pennsylvania,USA

10 posted 2003-09-11 06:56 PM

Hey,Marge...it warms my heart to see you're still writing such eloquent offerings such as this.Wonderful tribute.Heartfelt as always.

Your friend,Geoffrey

If a man has not discovered something he is willing to die for,his life is not worth living.

Martin Luther King,Jr. Detroit,1963

Corinne
Member Ascendant

since 1999-10-28

Posts 5167
state of confusion

11 posted 2003-09-11 07:11 PM

Lovingly written, Marge, for a day for which there are no words.

Peace,

Corinne

Betty
Senior Member

since 2002-08-13

Posts 1159
Virginia

12 posted 2003-09-18 10:06 AM

This si so nice Marge.
Betty

Betty
Senior Member

since 2002-08-13

Posts 1159
Virginia

13 posted 2003-09-18 10:07 AM

Beautiful.
Betty

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