Spirit Leaf ...............Senryu

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Open Poetry #28

Spirit Leaf ...............Senryu

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0 posted 2003-09-17 12:28 PM

In darkness, alone
another spirit leaf falls;
a day without you.

angelblueyes
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1 posted 2003-09-17 12:30 PM

This is sad to me

but written with great emotion.
Crystal

1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

2 posted 2003-09-17 12:30 PM

awwwwwwwwwww

Earth Angel
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3 posted 2003-09-17 12:35 PM

That sounds realllly lonely--and sweet.

:hug:
EA

wranx
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Moved from a shack to a barn

4 posted 2003-09-17 12:43 PM

Timely, dude, timely...

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

5 posted 2003-09-17 09:06 AM

Colors begin to fall
But in the gray, there is blue
Growth found in the mulch

Martie

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6 posted 2003-09-17 09:07 AM

So little says so much!

Cpat Hair

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7 posted 2003-09-17 09:07 AM

like this Ed... in form and in possible meanings....

LeeJ
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8 posted 2003-09-17 09:28 AM

But the message is, that you will live within each other and never be without...believe....it is true...there within your hearts, minds and souls....is life where two are joined as one.

Hugs

Pilgrimage
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9 posted 2003-09-17 09:41 AM

Black forest beckons;
Rock-strewn path wanders through it.
Will I find you there?
Will this darkness ever light?
Is there an end to this night?

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

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Canada eh.

10 posted 2003-09-17 09:43 AM

Well done Ed...
Enjoyed this one.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~ I love your glances meeting mine
across forever or the room ~

Nightshade

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just out of reach

11 posted 2003-09-17 10:14 AM

Ed, this is bittersweet...I enjoyed it. Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers
That perches in the soul ~
Emily Dickinson

suthern

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12 posted 2003-09-17 12:01 PM

You know... I read books that make me cry... I sniffle after 90 minutes of a movie... and in a few syllables, you grip the emotions just as poignantly and memorably.

This is excellent, my friend.

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