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Open Poetry #28
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Foxyoasis
Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla
0 posted 2003-09-16 08:37 PM


Cold ground wet
grass something
is calling me
but I dont know
what it is yet


stary skies
black nights
my soul deprived
from my sorrowful
heart

tears shed from my
wallowing eyes.
salty as they be
that is the kind of
life I have made
for me.

blood wreched from
my finger tips
makes me wish I could
just forget.

nothing is forever
as they famous saying
goes. better be careful
of how fast things
grow.

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....
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Aenimal
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350
the ass-end of space
1 posted 2003-09-16 09:08 PM

you're writing's really progressed, much more solid and focused great work
Foxyoasis
Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla
2 posted 2003-09-16 10:24 PM

thank you

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....
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