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"the Good the Bad the Ugly"
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"the Good the Bad the Ugly" |
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shannon harter Junior Member
since 2003-02-03
Posts 31waesaw,IN USA |
"The Good, The Bad, The Ugly" fresh and clean, blue eyed and blonde, all it took was one look,my heart was gone. he bought me roses, he took me out, he called me sweetie, and thought i was cute when i'd pout. -the good i didnt need friends,is what he claimed, if another guy looked then i was to blame. walking down the streets, he would shield my eyes, couldnt have me look at any male walking by. -the bad another slap in the face,for talking back,another pinch on the leg, i was never cut any slack. a hospital stay for having my arm ripped outta place,a lie to the doctors,"i fell down the staircase" -the ugly a little visit from courage, and a lot of anger at him, made me walk away,never to look back again. -the good somethings wrong with my body,somethings moving inside, i ran away far, from him i needed to hide. -the bad my back hurts so bad,my stomach feels strange, this cannot happen now, not at this early of stage. the blood is astounding, the grief, greater still. i know your supposed to feel forgivness in your heart, but for him, i never will. -the ugly |
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gringakiwi Member
since 2003-08-05
Posts 189 |
This was very sad indeed, a very moving piece shannon!  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
---and keep on walking! My goodness, if this is about you, you've been to hades and back--a few too many times!!! You did a fine job with this emotive write. I liked how you laid it out--that was very effective! Healing hugs, EA |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
The title drew me in... the story/poem drew my sorrow... if this is your life my prayers are with you... if this was your imagination, you have a gift at drawing on real life. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
 You know I loved the way you wrote this... |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
To be able to write about it like this (if it was from a personal experience)proves you are very very strong, and resilient. A very strong and powerful write, Shannon.  |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Bump  |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
wow this is sad and if it is about you hope your ok now If your afraid of the dark, then why did you come? |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
the journey through such pain and through such growth.. recorded well in your piece.. take courage... to write about it... even more and an understanding that all life is not the way we are sometimes led to believe.. nicely done |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggssssssss) Oh Shannon, my heart goes out to you, dearest friend, I understand your tears and though you didn't deserve any of this inner-hell, you writing these powerful sentiments only proves how strong and compassionate you are! (sigh) We all send angel healing hugs your way, sweet friend, you have many friends who love you and feel for you like me and many here, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Shannon, than you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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