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mysticpoe
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0 posted 2003-09-16 11:24 AM



Carry my pass:
Leave it all - on the Moon.
I’ll stop by some time
when it shines.
On those evenings
when my delusions
cross yesterdays –path.
You see –
for today, my sights are now set
on that optimistic journey,
called – new.
Where my clock is never lost
and my hands
will be the loaner,
my life - will have no cost.
This feeling which urns,
lashing outward – towards
the freedom in all of us.
To be born again
Within our own self meaning.
feeding our stride,
and delivering our
thoughts with control,
reliance through faith,
hence bestowed,
and now, - to know.

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

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Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2003-09-16 11:44 AM


mysticpoe
Well done, enjoyed the read.

KristieSue
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2 posted 2003-09-16 12:21 PM


To be born again
Within our own self meaning.
feeding our stride,
and delivering our
thoughts with control,
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Encouraging :-)  Good job

"Vision without action is a daydream.  Action without vision is a nightmare." -Japanese Proverb
~ KS

SharaRose
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Somewhere out there~
3 posted 2003-09-16 01:07 PM


Sounds like a mission for a positive journey!


SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

mysticpoe
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since 2003-02-28
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4 posted 2003-09-16 03:56 PM


Thank you Seymour, KristieSue and SharaRose, for stopping by. Wasn't sure how this one would go. Really appreciate your kind comments.

mysticpoe

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

wranx
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since 2002-06-07
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Moved from a shack to a barn
5 posted 2003-09-16 09:47 PM


Hey, POE! what's new!?!

(Sorry, couldn't pass it up..hehe)

Nice write, really.

Ed

mysticpoe
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6 posted 2003-09-16 11:23 PM


Thanks Ed, always do like it when you stop by. The best.

mysticpoe

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

angelblueyes
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since 2003-07-19
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Oklahoma
7 posted 2003-09-16 11:47 PM


I liked this alot.It's going to the library to give me that feeling when I need it.Well penned.
Crystal

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