Open Poetry #28 |
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mysticpoe Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883 |
Carry my pass: Leave it all - on the Moon. I’ll stop by some time when it shines. On those evenings when my delusions cross yesterdays –path. You see – for today, my sights are now set on that optimistic journey, called – new. Where my clock is never lost and my hands will be the loaner, my life - will have no cost. This feeling which urns, lashing outward – towards the freedom in all of us. To be born again Within our own self meaning. feeding our stride, and delivering our thoughts with control, reliance through faith, hence bestowed, and now, - to know. If nothing is something |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
mysticpoe Well done, enjoyed the read. |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
To be born again Within our own self meaning. feeding our stride, and delivering our thoughts with control, ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Encouraging :-) Good job "Vision without action is a daydream. Action without vision is a nightmare." -Japanese Proverb |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Sounds like a mission for a positive journey! SharaRose @-->-- Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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mysticpoe Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883 |
Thank you Seymour, KristieSue and SharaRose, for stopping by. Wasn't sure how this one would go. Really appreciate your kind comments. mysticpoe If nothing is something |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Hey, POE! what's new!?! (Sorry, couldn't pass it up..hehe) Nice write, really. Ed |
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mysticpoe Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883 |
Thanks Ed, always do like it when you stop by. The best. mysticpoe If nothing is something |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
I liked this alot.It's going to the library to give me that feeling when I need it.Well penned. Crystal |
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