Open Poetry #28 |
His Thoughts I Wonder |
HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
His Thoughts I Wonder It was useless me trying I was feeling frustrated Nothing much I could do Whilst I anxiously waited Long awaited catch ups I remain in expectation Yet the weeks of silence Increased my frustration My thoughts accumulate Progressing to my pen Perhaps I will hear soon I only wish I knew when Of his thoughts I wonder He can read into mine My feelings are mailed In the words of a rhyme HopeĀ©2003 |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
and beautiful they are as is the words of your lovely heart, inscribbed forever.... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Hope~ Not only is this a lovely piece ... but I just got my LovingYou.com poem of the day !!! It's YOU - Congratulations, gal~ LOVE POEM OF THE DAY FOR 9/16/03 -------------------------------------------- Special Hearts Destined by Hope Each time of my writing You made it worthwhile Being able to reach you With a hug and a smile In delivering all my love By heart designed letter To touch with my words Hopefully you feel better Read through the words Of my loving tenderness Embrace heart devotion Where I clearly express Cherishing the journeys Of sentimental affections Gratified by the feelings Of bonded connections Special hearts destined By sharing loving insight Our way of togetherness Are words that we write -------------------------------------------- *What a nice treat to start my day~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, the spirit rejoices over what it has left. - Sufi epigram [email protected] [This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (09-16-2003 08:48 AM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
HopeS A lovely write and a lovely read. |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
thanks Lee ... Yes I write because thoughts of him remain forever etched Hope |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
thanks Marge .... yes it was a nice surprise from LovingYou.com , that poem was written 9/1/03, I guess they are a little behind Hope |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Huge thanks Symour , I appreciate you comment Hope |
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