Open Poetry #28 |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
pain bleeds through skin is it love or subjugation you seek dog? illusions crawl beneath the skin you never stay you never leave and i left casting questions into the air as if i expected a response as if you'd existed how does it end dog? a lachrymose reconcilement? a feast for the dead alive again? keep your heaven and your hell we both know thy will is dumb as mine is numb and all i really need is sleep |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yeah Raph, me too |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sleep, Man! When you're rested, come do it again! |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Hate is a consuming venom that rapes its toll... -MVS You CAN make a difference: |
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serametheicebound New Member
since 2003-09-04
Posts 8South Africa-Free State |
That was very good.It deserves to be read the whole day.Keep posting staff like this... |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
How long hate can you pick at these blind eyes and not let me sleep? Even the vulture finds his fill and leaves the dead alone |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Thanks just a little sick of the dog |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
ahh Raph . . . yes yes I know this I do the write . . . keep your heaven and your hell we both know thy will is dumb as mine is numb powerful lines and execution xxoo |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
"a feast for the dead..." Truly! ...but of course, we'll sleep when we're dead! *smile* |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
You yell at the dog more eloquently than I do, Raph. |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
...ouch.. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
thanks Sue i know you do, keep their claws off billy ice i hope so, i really hope so grins Mike I'm limited by the censors grins Aye Meg, that's the feeling |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
SUEISM Raph . . . SUEISM (claws . . . yes *shuddering*) that made me laugh though thank you |
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