Open Poetry #28 |
Your Song |
Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
How pure the melody sung? Notes fell like tiers upon the staff An aria of voice and harp to stage amuse on your behalf How soft the melody upon your ear? Static whine or screech and tow? xylem carressed by slender bow to pitch the cry of reap and sow How pure the melody sung? Notes fell like tears upon the staff - my mozart finished white & black Alas the curtain, final act... ~tier |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful, yet hauntingly sad Tier. Wonderfully written and greatly enjoyed. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SweetPoeticSister~ Your thoughts are as soft as silk ... draping the page in words so tender~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssss) Oh no...that can't be how the play ends, this is just the intermission and in Act II there will come the denouement and it will become a comedy! (sigh) I send angel hugs your way, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet R.T, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Tier...this is simply beautiful... such a soft and gentle flow. Love it. Hugs, ~Vicky When the power of love overcomes the |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
HA! Tried to sneek one past me, eh? It's just a beauty Tier. It rings...you. Glad I was diggin around this evening. Ed (yes, that one) |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
So glad Wranx was digging around... dang. |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
This is sad, smooth, and beautiful all in one. Crystal |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
I "bow" to you humbly this is a choir of angels . . . beautiful Tier, as they all are . . . xxoo |
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