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Tiersdin
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0 posted 2003-09-15 07:30 PM





How pure the melody sung?

Notes fell like tiers upon
the staff
An aria of voice and harp
to stage amuse on your
behalf

How soft the melody upon
your ear?

Static whine or screech
and tow?
xylem carressed
by slender bow
to pitch the cry
of reap and sow

How pure the melody sung?

Notes fell like tears upon the
staff - my mozart finished
white & black

Alas the curtain,
final act...

~tier

© Copyright 2003 R.T. Webster-Mosby - All Rights Reserved
Enchantress
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1 posted 2003-09-15 07:34 PM


Beautiful, yet hauntingly sad Tier.
Wonderfully written and greatly enjoyed.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~


~ I love your glances meeting mine
     across forever or the room ~

Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2003-09-15 08:00 PM


SweetPoeticSister~
Your thoughts are as soft as silk ... draping the page in words so tender~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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Mistletoe Angel
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3 posted 2003-09-15 10:50 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh no...that can't be how the play ends, this is just the intermission and in Act II there will come the denouement and it will become a comedy! (sigh) I send angel hugs your way, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet R.T, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

vlraynes
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4 posted 2003-09-15 11:01 PM



Tier...this is simply beautiful...
such a soft and gentle flow.  Love it.
Hugs,
~Vicky

When the power of love overcomes the
love of power the world will know peace.
-Jimi Hendrix

wranx
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5 posted 2003-09-16 09:51 PM


HA! Tried to sneek one past me, eh?

It's just a beauty Tier. It rings...you.

Glad I was diggin around this evening.
Ed (yes, that one)

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
6 posted 2003-09-16 09:53 PM



So glad Wranx was digging around...

dang.

angelblueyes
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7 posted 2003-09-16 11:13 PM


This is sad, smooth, and beautiful all in one.
Crystal

littlewing
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8 posted 2003-09-17 01:13 PM


I "bow" to you humbly
this is a choir of angels . . .
beautiful Tier, as they
all are . . .
xxoo

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