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Sublime Truth
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since 2003-09-13
Posts 24
New Denver, B.C., Canada

0 posted 2003-09-15 11:27 PM


I can't express
How or why
Or why or how
I feel so depressed
How I feel I've lost
Before I've even began

Sung songs of love and life
But to now dwell upon hate and death
As my heart turns corners
Round and round it goes
Why does it do as it does
Why am I wanting so much
To simply be...

Why do I care?
When all is left to be lost
And all lost will come back to kill
Kill
Betray
As each thought haunts my every day
Thoughts seem to rot in my throat
When I cannot even dare
To simply walk away

Away
Away
As far as I can go
Hiding once more
Nothing left in store
No more love
No more hate
For as this night comes
I seal my fate...

    - Anyway yeah...self explanitory(?)
         - The Sublime

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mytuesdaywishes
Member
since 2003-09-05
Posts 254
a voice from the musicbox
1 posted 2003-09-15 11:40 PM


ouch, so harsh. just keep writing, the best thing about words is that they sympathize. so keep expressing yourself, you're passion for life is inspiring, even though you may not see it.


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