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rose
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since 2003-08-02
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0 posted 2003-09-15 07:16 PM


I met you
and I cried, wait!
Don’t go!
Stay here to hold my hand—
But you would not hold my hand—
Hold my hand,
because I am not
who you think I am---
and I cannot hold my own hand.

I do not have
the strength
you think I have—
You have taken it all from me,
Robbed me in the darkest hours of the night
Stolen it and
Locked it away—
and I have been grateful
To let go
and fall—slowly—
--unendingly—
into the shadow of your love
and let the purple midnight there
consume me—
and let the greening vines of love and laughter
reach into the bottom of my heart,
growing slowly, so that even I was not aware,
to extract my thoughts, my feelings—

Hold my hand!
Still I am crying
for you,
and still I follow in your shadow,
though you do not glance back to see me
Trailing there.


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1 posted 2003-09-15 07:24 PM


Rose~
I found such a soft ache in this penning~

'let the purple midnight there
consume me—'


This thought is priceless~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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mysticpoe
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since 2003-02-28
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2 posted 2003-09-15 09:20 PM


I feel a sense of faith here. Nice write.

mysticpoe

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

wranx
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3 posted 2003-09-15 09:24 PM


Very, very nice

A great write
~wranx

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