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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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Prophetic you may say, or choose to believe I do not presume to impose, but the internal monologue Is extraordinary, in the spirit of passageways Vortex swabbing realities, of fire-breathing powers Embodies vast contradictions, shaping intensely the hours Where luminous clarity embodies moist and green Touching fleeting moments, sudden awareness perceives Viable and perceptible truths, garners from absolution New senses of life’s discrete phases painting a tangible grail These poignant deep hopes are dreams tempered By a nostalgia of wonderment about play Density of the like perspective of incidence, to the eyes Reflections of memories, into our present knowledge finds The impact with which intently I sit, where the age of things Remain, both with sensitivity and exactness Oh, the power of spontaneity, the wildness which nourish The very roots of expression, youthful inner life marries Emerging to an landmark, a cave with which we feel Mythic dimensions, creates the images internally real Elements taking a long floating leap outpouring surprise For sweetness, for joy, stepping out of body, the images write |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
Hi lee Oh, the power of spontaneity, the wildness which nourish I really enjoyed these lines,, A wonderful penning n read see/ya |
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mysticpoe Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883 |
Real nice write. mysticpoe If nothing is something |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I have to come back and read this again, tomorrow when my eyes are rested...you sure are stretching my mind  hugs M |
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