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Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

0 posted 2003-09-15 07:06 PM

Not Me

How difficult can one challenge be
Something that has not been rehearsed
A dare never tried before
How difficult for me?
But easy isn’t
My cup of tea
Not for me
Not for
me

~*~

quote:
A nonet has nine lines. The first line has nine syllables, the second line eight syllables, the third line seven syllables, etc... until line nine that finishes with one syllable. It can be on any subject and rhyming is optional.
line 1 - 9 syllables
line 2 - 8 syllables
line 3 - 7 syllables
line 4 - 6 syllables
line 5 - 5 syllables
line 6 - 4 syllables
line 7 - 3 syllables
line 8 - 2 syllables
line 9 - 1 syllable

~*~
http://members.optushome.com.au/kazoom/poetry/nonet.html

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

1 posted 2003-09-15 07:12 PM

Hello Karilea

This was so very well done, as only you can.
I hope all is well with you.

Take care......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2003-09-15 07:19 PM

Oh my!! This is fantastic Karilea!
Boy..ya learn something new every time you open PiP.
Don't think I'll try this at the moment..
need quiet time..wizard out of the way time.

~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

Nan

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

3 posted 2003-09-15 08:22 PM

Looks like you to me....

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

4 posted 2003-09-15 08:37 PM

Well, this just happens to be a form I've
never tried before, so I mightjust have
to play with it and see what spills
out of the pen.

Thanks for the challenge, Karilea..
When the power of love overcomes the
love of power the world will know peace.
-Jimi Hendrix

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2003-09-15 08:41 PM

Karilea~
As with all else ... you succeed beautifully at this too !
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
noles1@totcon.com

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

6 posted 2003-09-15 09:25 PM

very interesting Karilea..I like this form.
thanks for the description of it.
*s
M

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

7 posted 2003-09-15 10:14 PM

Karilea - this looks mighty interesting! I will give it a try - sometime...

Well done my dear friend. hugs, Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers
That perches in the soul ~
Emily Dickinson

Bridget Shenachie
Senior Member

since 2002-01-23

Posts 1056
Kansas USA

8 posted 2003-09-15 11:45 PM

Sometimes the seemingly easy way out is deceptive. That doesn't mean that the hard path is the right path. Cowardice is hard to accept in yourself. There is no easy way out--and the shortest way through a difficulty is through it. Choosing the right path is always a big question. Knowing you, Karilea, you have always made the right choices.
Interesting form that I have never seen before. Form and content meld well in this poem. Maybe this form could be referred to the workshop. Big question for the rest of us--a theme for this format.
Excellent write!

Shenachie

garysgirl