Marine Layer.........Choka

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Open Poetry #28

Marine Layer.........Choka

James_A_Fraser
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since 2003-09-03

Posts 972
Out Making Anticlines

0 posted 2003-09-15 05:32 PM

Marine Layer

It has the wrong name,
the sound hard, disconcerting,
like a metal shroud
rolling ashore from the sea...
It is worse, really:
It creeps in, bringing a chill,
as gray clouds block the sunshine.

....for a friend, with sorrow
for something I can't define.

James A. Fraser

[This message has been edited by James_A_Fraser (09-15-2003 05:40 PM).]

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

1 posted 2003-09-15 05:45 PM

It creeps in, bringing a chill,
as gray clouds block the sunshine.

A sorrow you can't define is shared... so that we feel it, too. Excellent work! *S*

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2003-09-16 01:50 PM

Very haunting, James...
I can hear the gulls in the distance,
searching...

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2003-09-16 01:52 PM

Chilling feeling with this piece...
very well explained, much enjoyed.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~ I love your glances meeting mine
across forever or the room ~

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2003-09-16 08:28 PM

(big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, dearest friend, my heart goes out to you and your friend! (sad sigh) You speak of the anguish deeply, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

5 posted 2003-09-16 08:43 PM

James...A friend that sees and responds this way...is like sunshine!

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