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Hurricane Liz |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981
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losing grip more and more each day, I strike matches and play with fire Every doorknob becoming a trap don’t turn on the lights when the basement’s flooded you might be shocked… I sense some disturbance here you should choke you shouldn’t breathe so easily too much silence not enough rain if eyes are the windows to my soul then NO ONE’S HOME. Poor puppy. I should pity but instead pull the chain tighter oh you’re in trouble now… it’s not me- it’s you I swear… stupid you can’t see what you’ve done I need to call the damage control or hurricane patrol before I do something insane this storm identical to every one before it And the angel said unto me, "These are the cries of the carrots, the cries of the carrots!" |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
(chuckling) this storm... like all the ones before it only a template that is used before the colors are added... some colors are darker than others.. you do write beyond your years.. Ms Chopped liver... oh..no your not chopped liver... your lemon cream pie... |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
lemons? where?  And the angel said unto me, "These are the cries of the carrots, the cries of the carrots!" |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You're not nuts! You're poppin' corny! lol  You really do need to get some more sunshine, Dear One! Mind you, these doldrums do make for some interesting poetry.  EA |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You need to let Duncan out of your room... so he can get back to writing. I wondered where he ended up... ~*~ Very intense, Liz. If I didn't know you'd come back with a off-the-shoulder reply, coming from anyone else, I would be sincerely concerned.  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Liz...you are a wonder!! You make me smile..laugh and wonder! Good stuff here gal. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
lol..I said 'poor puppy' not 'porch puppy'  ah...I needed that  EA...nah..I get enough sunshine right here  just kidding sunny  And the angel said unto me, "These are the cries of the carrots, the cries of the carrots!" -Tool [This message has been edited by Wind (09-15-2003 07:47 PM).] |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Wind my dear, you are the eye of the storm and don't even know it!! Awesome. Chris  "Hope" is the thing with feathers |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
but the eye doesn't have any wind. isn't that ironic?  thanks Nightshade And the angel said unto me, "These are the cries of the carrots, the cries of the carrots!" |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
you so crazeh that's why we larvae u |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
sure...gotta lava tha way ya spell boy And the angel said unto me, "These are the cries of the carrots, the cries of the carrots!" |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Liz..what can I say..I read you always..and wonder where that big voice comes from.. hugs M |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) How do you even know if the storm is taking precedent down in that basement, for if you are the eye of the storm here most certainly are greater banshees outside! (big hugggssssssss) This is so clever, sweet friend, love that personification, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Liz, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth I can see the sun set and I perceive ***Live*** [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (09-15-2003 11:12 PM).] |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Hey, make sure all that water doesn't put the fire out! I love your fire! Susan |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Okay...gotta admit...I thought of Duncan too, when I read 'poor puppy'...LOL. Enjoyed this, Liz. Hugs, ~Vicky When the power of love overcomes the |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
I happen to be very good to pourch puppy. lol..you can even ask him  And the angel said unto me, "These are the cries of the carrots, the cries of the carrots!" |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
You owe me a new basement now. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hey Hurricane Liz I larvae U too!!! I wish that I could look inside your mind.... I'll bet whatever it is that controls the thought process works 90 miles a minute in there. LOL You are amazing, little friend....and I really do loooooooovveeee it!!!! Ethel |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
dayuuuhm. did i sound american then? say yes. i did in me head. you are on fire! or not, youre wind, but, keep em coming. Instant karma's gonna get you. |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
aren't you guys a riot. lol...I talk like I am british all the time. heeee... were ya tring to say damn? we say in like this: dam. lol anit THAT hard gem no i don't do basements i larve u all And the angel said unto me, "These are the cries of the carrots, the cries of the carrots!" |
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