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Barefoot midnight
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Barefoot midnight |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA 
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Never trust shoes walk barefoot upon hearts I'll mow your lawns pick dead heads from your favourite flower so they'll re bloom hands upon the latch opening your back door chopping sticks with fresh blade grass never cut this smooth before chewing either knocking on wood tumbleweed stomach pacing the gate I want to see ghosts but i just don't dare shut my eyes water feature trickle underbelly glisten of fish thousands of pennies without a wish never trust your shoes you don't know what the underneath feels like Instant karma's gonna get you. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
I want to see ghosts but i just don't dare shut my eyes water feature trickle underbelly glisten of fish thousands of pennies without a wish never trust your shoes you don't know what the underneath feels like ah... walking rough shod over the tender belies any sensitvity to the underneath feelings.. liked this Gem... and the ending lines particularly, but the images through out ..well done.... inviting indeed... lol... lucky for you I am an old fart.. |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
this is just fabulous....I WANT IT gem!!! you make me want to keep them all...stupid girl...  ugh..not that song again... guess what...I gonna write soooomethinggggg  And the angel said unto me, "These are the cries of the carrots, the cries of the carrots!" |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
damn just awesome! |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
"water feature trickle underbelly glisten of fish thousands of pennies without a wish never trust your shoes you don't know what the underneath feels like" This is VERY cool stuff, Gemma...I love it. Hugs,  ~Vicky When the power of love overcomes the love of power the world will know peace. -Jimi Hendrix [This message has been edited by vlraynes (09-16-2003 03:18 AM).] |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
This is SOOOO good. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
............wow. |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
lol, passing shadows read my mind exactly I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Yay! Oh Gemma, this is beautiful, sweet friend, I love walking barefoot, and, when I have to, I just wear sandals, as that is the shoe that comes closest to feeling free! (kiss on cheek) Mother Nature is all around us and I wish to tread upon her creation, not leather, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Gemma, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
The footprints that your knowing and reflective words leave on one’s heart, are exhilarant, and inspiring... Very Stirring! And Much Enjoyed! Richy |
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mytuesdaywishes Member
since 2003-09-05
Posts 254a voice from the musicbox |
i completely agree. barefoot is the best way. barehearted too. i love the nonchalant passion you express. and even when everything was wrong, and we were mad at the world, it was still beautiful. |
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