Open Poetry #28 |
an end |
Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
your reign will end in stone crack and vine in brown and green flaura and fauna reclaim the stolen gaia speaks in whispers but screams in the heart of i hear it content photography © Copyright 2003 RG [This message has been edited by Aenimal (09-16-2003 03:38 AM).] |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
You know this one is my favourite. urban jungle. you're nearly as talented as kelly you mr are worth too much to measure. i have said you 3 times, somebody feeed meeee! Instant karma's gonna get you. |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
*drools* |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Raph, they say that a picture speaks a thousand words..... well, your picture along with your words speaks volumes, Sir. I love this and am going to keep it, if that's okay? -n- Ethel |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh my...amazing!
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
you are the best photographer I know (except for my mother of course) and you also paint with words talent sheer talent |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nice image... and I enjoyed the wording here..but truthfully found the repeating lines at the end not to be needed and taking away from the overall impact... perhaps a play on reign... rain... or something to rhyme... you'll deign and end... LOL... once in a while..I read something and it strikes me..as such a good beginning or the presentation something that inspires me..and I find myself more critical than usual... this one hit me that way... made me want to write it... LOL... not that I would do it better...but just feel the need to translate it into my own words somehow..so I make suggestions... |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
yer a doll Gem but you have to stop licking chairs here's a napkin megs..we gotta do somethin bout that problem thanks for the compliment Ethel Thank you Nancy H you're mother painted with deeds thus creating the masterpiece that is you.. Ron agree with you completely, it felt redundant but i was in a mood and loved the sound of the line, always feel free to make suggestions with me |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
amazing what a little schrubery will do to infuse some life into the most mundane of surroundings....... |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
This is awesome. The photo & your words. hugs, Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
HEY! looks like the back of my old apartment in the city...preeetyyy pictures...makes krissy happy urhh yeah...this was kewl.. If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Raph, ohh you know I adore this photo from a long time ago . . . and end? somehow (strangely) I see beauty in this amazing writing, your back!!!! xxoo |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
b/w is still the best, and you caught this one dead in its tracks. DRAMATIC! -MVS You CAN make a difference: |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
You bring such life to things wiht your photography and your words.Amazing. Crystal |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Thanks kris Sue there is beauty to an end Mark exactly why i never work with anything but B/W film when i do take pictures Crystal thank you for the compliment |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Raph...I love this...both the photo and the accompanying verse. VERY nicely done, sir poet. Hugs, ~Vicky When the power of love overcomes the |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
completely incredible...and I love the black&white photo as well! Black and white are SO fun to take... "Vision without action is a daydream. Action without vision is a nightmare." -Japanese Proverb |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Love the photo! Great words! It was worth the read. Wonderfully done...looking forward to seeing more. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
there is indeed (that is not what I meant and no, still not getting your wish) |
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