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Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

0 posted 2003-09-15 04:25 PM

your reign will end
in stone crack and vine
in brown and green

flaura and fauna
reclaim the stolen
gaia speaks in whispers
but screams in the heart of
i hear it content

photography © Copyright 2003 RG

[This message has been edited by Aenimal (09-16-2003 03:38 AM).]

gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

1 posted 2003-09-15 04:32 PM

You know this one is my favourite. urban jungle.
you're nearly as talented as kelly

you mr are worth too much to measure.
i have said you 3 times, somebody feeed meeee!

Instant karma's gonna get you.

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

2 posted 2003-09-15 04:36 PM

*drools*

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

3 posted 2003-09-15 04:43 PM

Raph, they say that a picture speaks a thousand words.....
well, your picture along with your words speaks volumes, Sir.
I love this and am going to keep it, if that's okay?

-n-

Ethel

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2003-09-15 04:45 PM

Oh my...amazing!

~ I love your glances meeting mine
across forever or the room ~

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

5 posted 2003-09-15 04:46 PM

you are the best photographer I know
(except for my mother of course)
and you also paint with words
talent sheer talent

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

6 posted 2003-09-15 04:47 PM

nice image... and I enjoyed the wording here..but truthfully found the repeating lines at the end not to be needed and taking away from the overall impact...
perhaps a play on reign... rain... or something to rhyme... you'll deign and end...

LOL... once in a while..I read something and it strikes me..as such a good beginning or the presentation something that inspires me..and I find myself more critical than usual... this one hit me that way... made me want to write it... LOL... not that I would do it better...but just feel the need to translate it into my own words somehow..so I make suggestions...

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

7 posted 2003-09-15 08:27 PM

yer a doll Gem but you have to stop licking chairs

here's a napkin megs..we gotta do somethin bout that problem

thanks for the compliment Ethel

Thank you Nancy

H you're mother painted with deeds thus creating the masterpiece that is you..

Ron agree with you completely, it felt redundant but i was in a mood and loved the sound of the line, always feel free to make suggestions with me

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

8 posted 2003-09-15 10:19 PM

amazing what a little schrubery will do to
infuse some life into the most mundane of surroundings.......

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

9 posted 2003-09-15 10:22 PM

This is awesome. The photo & your words. hugs, Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers
That perches in the soul ~
Emily Dickinson

Ceinwyn
Member Elite

since 2000-07-09

Posts 2175
VA

10 posted 2003-09-15 10:34 PM

HEY! looks like the back of my old apartment in the city...preeetyyy pictures...makes krissy happy

urhh yeah...this was kewl..

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

11 posted 2003-09-16 01:43 PM

Raph, ohh you know I adore this photo from a long time ago . . .
and end?

somehow (strangely) I see beauty in this
amazing writing, your back!!!!
xxoo

MARK V SHELDON
Member Elite

since 2001-06-21

Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...

12 posted 2003-09-17 12:04 PM

b/w is still the best, and you caught this one dead in its tracks. DRAMATIC!

-MVS

You CAN make a difference:
http://educate-yourself.org/

angelblueyes
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

13 posted 2003-09-17 12:09 PM

You bring such life to things wiht your photography and your words.Amazing.

Crystal

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

14 posted 2003-09-17 12:14 PM

Thanks kris

Sue there is beauty to an end

Mark exactly why i never work with anything but B/W film when i do take pictures

Crystal thank you for the compliment

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

15 posted 2003-09-17 12:15 PM

Raph...I love this...both the photo
and the accompanying verse.

VERY nicely done, sir poet.

Hugs,
~Vicky
When the power of love overcomes the
love of power the world will know peace.
-Jimi Hendrix

KristieSue

Senior Member

since 2003-01-31

Posts 1460
PA, US

16 posted 2003-09-17 10:52 AM

completely incredible...and I love the black&white photo as well! Black and white are SO fun to take...

"Vision without action is a daydream. Action without vision is a nightmare." -Japanese Proverb
~ KS

EvocativeVerse2
Senior Member

since 2003-09-10

Posts 1279

17 posted 2003-09-17 11:14 AM

Love the photo! Great words! It was worth the read. Wonderfully done...looking forward to seeing more.

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

18 posted 2003-09-17 01:07 PM

there is indeed
(that is not what I meant
and no, still not getting your wish)

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