A Magic Moon (rays inspired by Sandra)

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Open Poetry #28

A Magic Moon (rays inspired by Sandra)

ctowen
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since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

0 posted 2003-09-15 01:31 PM

I have seen her ravened hair
straight and shining with a flare
a touch of pale on her face
of which, her smile, willed and grace

I felt her pull without touch
rays of words tender as such
paths of lonliness did meet
and lost in a moments fleet

I wish on a magic moon
a true heart for her to swoon
and live on, each star-filled night
ending loss, starting her flight

Miracles can happen, even on the moon.

Fear is a blindness, heart is the cure. - C. Belville 02

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2003-09-15 02:45 PM

CTOwen~
Each of these pennings are as graceful as the poets they depict~
CatalinaMoon will be so very pleased~
You are a gentle word-artist~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
noles1@totcon.com

ctowen
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since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

2 posted 2003-09-15 03:15 PM

Thank you, Marge.

    I do hope each one knows the inspiration they pass,
    in word as well as voice.

    I may have started something I may never be able to finish,
    for everyone at Passions has left their drops of inspiration
    on my soul ....  even you, with warmest hugglets!!

Ringo

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since 2003-02-20

Posts 3684
Saluting with misty eyes

3 posted 2003-09-15 03:52 PM

This is just beautiful. Very well written.

We are all equal but we’re individually different
and able to reach the impossible if we try.

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

4 posted 2003-09-18 12:22 PM

Craig, how lovely, what a compliment to inspire a poem from you. (I've been offline, sorry I missed this)
Hugs
Sandra

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