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Open Poetry #28
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Bonfirelight
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 85
London, England
0 posted 2003-09-15 11:50 AM

Graphite scrawling
A crawling mess
With open wounds the bawling confess

It's got my heart in
But we're Just passing

Loading up on
Stock we like best
Which we love
Which we pick
cherish caress

We protest
But do we impress?

Seventy five, maybe Eighty
Don't hate me.
Judge me and rate me.
Sit down debate me
Make me.
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QjQ
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since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756
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1 posted 2003-09-15 09:58 PM

                               
vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...
2 posted 2003-09-16 06:05 AM


An interesting write, Bonfire.  Enjoyed this.
~Vicky

When the power of love overcomes the
love of power the world will know peace.
-Jimi Hendrix
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