Reflected Shore of Staid ( Waves Hold No Heaven)

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Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

0 posted 2003-09-15 11:27 AM

There is an empty place
Just left of Venus rising
Where there seems no shine or sparkle
Visible to the naked stare

I would not place you there
In a black void of vacant cold
Just to honor the beauty and fill the eyes

But,
I will instead listen to the roll
Of wave on shore and hear in each
Shushing rush the sounds of blood
Through the veins of you
As when I lay my head against
Your chest and was filled
Even closed eyed
With novas of inspire

Still,
My eyes do turn to the heavens
And I stare at that space seemingly empty
And wonder how it would be
To sit alongside Venus
Filling a void

“She swept the stars from his eyes and kissed the holes
left there in their passing.”

The heavens will wait
My eyes are dim

angelblueyes
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

1 posted 2003-09-15 11:29 AM

WOW!!!This is amazing and going straight to my library.

Crystal

MARK V SHELDON
Member Elite

since 2001-06-21

Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...

2 posted 2003-09-15 11:35 AM

Strange, isn't it? "She" holds more power and consequence than even "she" knows... Another autumn lament exuding your style.

-MVS

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Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2003-09-15 11:44 AM

Beautiful...as always Ron..I am in awe!!
Fantastic write poet sir.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~ Summer can't be over...
I still have sand in my shoes ~

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2003-09-15 11:51 AM

Oh dang....

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

5 posted 2003-09-15 01:02 PM

But,
I will instead listen to the roll
Of wave on shore and hear in each
Shushing rush the sounds of blood
Through the veins of you
As when I lay my head against
Your chest and was filled
Even closed eyed
With novas of inspire

Still,
My eyes do turn to the heavens
And I stare at that space seemingly empty
And wonder how it would be
To sit alongside Venus
Filling a void

“She swept the stars from his eyes and kissed the holes
left there in their passing.”

The heavens will wait
My eyes are dim
=========================

*dittoing Kari's dang*

right about now...I'd kill for your muse. *L*

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

6 posted 2003-09-15 01:02 PM

hmmmmmmmmmm.....I can hear it.

Susan

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

7 posted 2003-09-15 01:06 PM

But,
I will instead listen to the roll
Of wave on shore and hear in each
Shushing rush the sounds of blood
Through the veins of you
As when I lay my head against
Your chest and was filled
Even closed eyed
With novas of inspire

oh how inspirational...lovely write (sigh)

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