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Surrender
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US 
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You think you'd give up listen to what I say believe me just for once I'm not ALWAYS the wrong What is going on it's out of control spinning and spinning is it lost for forever I throw up my arms surrender for good I'd rather give in than give up forever "Vision without action is a daydream. Action without vision is a nightmare." -Japanese Proverb |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
It has to be a halfway meeting between two.You can't always be the wrong for then you badger yourself and begin to feel you are nothing.I've been there.Stand up once in awhile and take heart in what you know is true.Don't let others beat you down for you are a caring heart and a gentle spirit.  Crystal |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
ty angel...that means as lot "Vision without action is a daydream. Action without vision is a nightmare." -Japanese Proverb |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
:-) ty "Vision without action is a daydream. Action without vision is a nightmare." -Japanese Proverb |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
Yer a lovely gal, y know? Very nice ending lines.  Instant karma's gonna get you. |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
lol thanks Gemma....I know at least one who doesn't agree... thanks! "Vision without action is a daydream. Action without vision is a nightmare." -Japanese Proverb |
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