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The Fair at the Fair
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The Fair at the Fair |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California 
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The Fair at the Fair Lath house of sunlight air falls misted into a forest The color of silver slanted rain in freeways from the sky of man made mist turn to diamonds and takes the hair of the little girl with braids who wears them into the flowers and enchants me |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Oh...this is precious...lovely lovely write! Much enjoyed.   SharaRose @-->-- Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
A Moment Poem (my new definition)....captures a moment in scintillating detail....this one in a way that only Martie can. You make me wish I'd gone to the fair today, seen that little girl myself, just to know whether my eyes could possibly find the beauty that yours did.... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sister~ Consistently ... you just do it consistently !!!! Quite amazing is your perception lovely poetess~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh to see things through your eyes Martie! What a sweet thought here this morning. Lovely...lovely. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~ Summer can't be over... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You bring the magic with you... and you always leave a little behind. Good morning, Martie! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nicely captured Martie.. nice indeed |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Thank you for sharing this magical moment. |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
You captured a single moment and stretched it into an eternity for us to read over and over. Wonderfully done. Love it! |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
I really do love this...nice job! "Vision without action is a daydream. Action without vision is a nightmare." -Japanese Proverb |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
You always bring such life and magic to your page.Well done.  Crystal |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Yay! Oh martie, those have always been my favorite festivals, dearest friend, when Mother Nature is the hostess those lovely mornings and afternoons! (kiss on cheek) Yay, go flower power, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Martie, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Smiling at you... I love this, Martie...wonderful to see you inspired.  When the power of love overcomes the |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
And with your pen, you enchant us all. *S* Beautiful work! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
sweet, Martie.. |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
Martie - this is so loving and sweet - I loved it - paul |
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