Ride Each Wave (inspired by Helen)

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Open Poetry #28

Ride Each Wave (inspired by Helen)

ctowen
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since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

0 posted 2003-09-14 11:22 PM

I find myself
standing against the rise
each line breaking
aching in my eyes

I feel every word
swelling in my chest
moved by their flow
slow, unlike the crest

I ride each wave
believing a little more
each time I read you
few words fall to shore

Your words are a pleasure to ride!

Fear is a blindness, heart is the cure. - C. Belville 02

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

1 posted 2003-09-14 11:31 PM

im breathelss here,waiting.............

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2003-09-15 12:46 PM

Helen will love this! And now, we all know that an inkedgoddess treat will not be far behind.

Craig, you'll have a big line forming before this day is over.
Well done, sweet romantic heart.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2003-09-15 03:54 AM

very nice

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

4 posted 2003-09-15 06:51 AM

my God craig...this IS beautiful...i am so touched you honor me this way...what a wonderful gift to start my day...thank you so very much...and do i love it?...today you have wrapped me in velvet...and NOTHING shall crush it...h (she leaves blowing a warm southern kiss)

gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

5 posted 2003-09-15 12:30 PM

I'm impressed at how well you read not just poetry, but people..outstanding m friend!

keeping this...it is so helen.

Instant karma's gonna get you.

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