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Bonnie j
Senior Member

since 2003-06-27

Posts 1588
Ohio

0 posted 2003-08-02 01:07 PM

Rhapsody

The tenderness captured
in the aphrodisiac of eternal love
and
made into your own personal epiphany.
This love a rhapsody of music
swirling around your heart like the
sheer translucent wings of the wind.
Flickering candles
casting shadows
of
romantic interludes
and
measured symphonies
of
natures intricate ballet of exotic
intrigue.
An illusion of sheer chiffon cascading
a
gentle breeze across blushing skin
and
flowing across fevered minds.
Ah!
The beauty of the after glow
of
midnight tingling
within the walls of a tapestry
of
exotic soliloquies.
We are my enchanting darling,
entangled in the rhapsody
of
loves sweet melody.

Bonnie J.

skyshine

Member Elite

since 2002-02-07

Posts 3058
Beneath the northern stars

1 posted 2003-08-02 01:20 PM

This is very pretty!

~Elizabeth

Dreams last for so long, even after you're gone...
~Jewel

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2003-08-02 04:42 PM

The music of your heart is indeed a very beautiful rhapsody!
Very beautiful.
Love, Margherita

Janette

Member Elite

since 2001-07-20

Posts 2843
Chicagoland for now

3 posted 2003-08-02 05:57 PM

"midnight tingling
within the walls of a tapestry"

I like how you sing.

Enjoyed

angelblueyes
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

4 posted 2003-08-05 07:25 AM

The music of your heart and soul sings wonderful here.
angelblueyes

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

5 posted 2003-08-05 08:56 AM

this was a musical enchantment to read....lovely Bonnie, best was the afterglow...wow...how beautiful....thank you for sharing your loving heart

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

6 posted 2003-09-06 09:45 PM

excellent penning lady poetess

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

7 posted 2003-09-06 09:49 PM

We are my enchanting darling,
entangled in the rhapsody
of
loves sweet melody

Oh yes, Bonnie. Very good thoughts.....

Hugs

Ethel

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

8 posted 2003-09-07 10:45 AM

What a beautiful poem -- it looks good on you. Your conception, what you did with the shape, adds so much!

Yo, Lucky! Take notice, my friend. This lady's added a new twist to your way of writing.

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