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Memories |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Someone can be In my mind If I can bring the person to me I will be lost When you touch I would be in heaven With you forever I won't get lost unless you decide to be with me Memories can bring back Those days of love which we used to share together Memories are coming back to me It is all coming back to me It is hurting me I can feelthe heart beating fast When I hear your song on the radio everyday It brings back to my mind All the things you used to say I can hear your voice calling As the wind blows I took deep breathe And It brought me back those days of love we used to say Memories.... [This message has been edited by vandana (09-03-2003 05:27 PM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
vandana Well done, enjoyed the read. |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
memories can give us that happiness instead of just sadness.You've penned that well here.Loved the form of this. Crystal |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Oh Vandana, I have missed your gorgeous words so much, sweet friend, always cherish those memories you hold to heart and try to forget about the tears that followed, God Bless You, here's angel friendship hugs for you, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vandana, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
*Sad sigh*...very well written Vandana! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~ Summer can't be over... |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
vandana~ you are a poetess after my own heart! This reminds me of one of my many theme songs... And if you read between the lines, you'll know that I'm just trying to understand, the feelings that you have...and you won't read that book again because the ending's just too hard to take~ |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
This is so very bittersweet... ~K~ |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
thoughts expressed well,,,, |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Ah memories - you bring them to life. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
May your heart be filled with good memories...James |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
There is a lovely song "Memories", and it holds as much to it as does your poem. Very, very nice, Vandana. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Wishing you showers of gentle, soft memory moments, my friend. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Vandana, I hope that your memories will be filled with very good thoughts. Hugs to you, my friend  Ethel |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Sweetly conceived and beautifully said. I hope it reaches the heart of the one for whom it was written. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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