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MorninGlory
Member

since 2003-08-30

Posts 175
Oklahoma

0 posted 2003-09-14 02:55 PM

~

When lovers touch, as lovers do,
soft spoken eyes in muted hues,
as tender lips bid welcome with
whispered words on bated breath.

The heart quickens, he touches her
With such affection, and gently stirs
their souls to touch, enchantment’s trance
that sways and sighs in true love’s dance.

When breath is slowed and passion spent,
they talk of things, their life content,
and sigh and hold each other close,
sweet kisses shared in candle's glow.

And as they share in whispered hush
awash in scented passion’s blush
breathing slows and soft eyes close
to peaceful sleep they gently doze.

He lay so still, so quietly,
Not quite asleep, though soon would be.
He turns and whispers oh so softly,
“Thou art beautiful, and I love thee.”

~

[This message has been edited by MorninGlory (09-14-2003 02:56 PM).]

froggy
Senior Member

since 2003-06-23

Posts 1893
Michigan

1 posted 2003-09-14 03:25 PM

Beautiful MorninGlory.
So romantic sounding.

:-)

JilGirl
Member

since 2003-05-24

Posts 364
Washington

2 posted 2003-09-14 04:20 PM

Thy poetry art beautiful, too!
Thou did'st a fine job!

Blessings!
Shirl

'Tiz feathers that make the bird -
Always remember to keep them fluffed
but, never, EVER ruffle them!

[This message has been edited by JilGirl (09-14-2003 04:21 PM).]

SharaRose
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

3 posted 2003-09-14 04:39 PM

Awww this is as sweet as can be...Loved it!

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

Kahlil
Senior Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 1881

4 posted 2003-09-14 11:43 PM

hooooweeee ~K~

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

5 posted 2003-09-15 07:46 PM

Wow!!

Your words were the epitome of true love and romance.

"Love......
to melt and be like
a running brook that
sings its melody
to the night."

Take care......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

6 posted 2003-09-15 08:42 PM

MorninGlory~
The soft lilting flow of this is simply breathtaking~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
noles1@totcon.com

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2003-09-15 11:15 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, this is soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, and may this romance always whisper to your heart and set you spinning in smiles! (big hugggsssssss) Yay, your poetry is so magical, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (09-15-2003 11:15 PM).]

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

8 posted 2003-09-16 04:38 AM

Silky...James

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

9 posted 2003-09-16 04:41 AM

MorninGlory...this is lovely and flows so
softly and beautifully. Nicely penned.
Hugs,
~Vicky
When the power of love overcomes the
love of power the world will know peace.
-Jimi Hendrix

MorninGlory
Member

since 2003-08-30

Posts 175
Oklahoma

10 posted 2003-09-16 08:12 PM

Thank you so much for your comments, this was written because someone special in my life inspired me, we all wish for this kind of love, and those of us that find it are lucky indeed.

~ becky

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