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Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
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0 posted 2003-09-14 10:35 AM

even your hair
softens
as if it
sleeps

drifts
across the
pillow
like shadows
of a dream

your
breath
a sigh,
soft as a
memory
of song

the curves
of you
half lit by the
moon glazed
window

they flow
motionless
vibrant
call me
like satin
even in
sleep

always
always I
see you so
know you
as I know
my heartbeat
in the
darkness

and know
even as I
know
that these are
wonders

joys of you
that

I will
never
see

[This message has been edited by Ratleader (09-14-2003 10:39 AM).]

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

1 posted 2003-09-14 10:43 AM

"always
always I
see you so
know you
as I know
my heartbeat
in the
darkness"

You've captured a moment in this one that many will understand Ed. Ethereal beauty...yes. Excellent write!

SharaRose
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

2 posted 2003-09-14 10:47 AM

As if whispered. Beauty in form of words. Lovely!
Shara @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

3 posted 2003-09-14 10:52 AM

Ed, this is beautiful. I might just have to repost that one I wrote before about love being just beyond reach. Right?

Hugs to you, friend

Ethel

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

4 posted 2003-09-14 11:03 AM

Beautiful!!

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

5 posted 2003-09-14 11:09 AM

very lovely, Ed... very romantic.

M

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

6 posted 2003-09-14 11:09 AM

Imagination...

it's a wonderful
ability...

JilGirl
Member

since 2003-05-24

Posts 364
Washington

7 posted 2003-09-14 11:44 AM

Lovely and romantic!
Sad that "she" shall
never be seen ~~
Perhaps she will?

'Tiz feathers that make the bird -
Always remember to keep them fluffed
but, never, EVER ruffle them!

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

8 posted 2003-09-14 12:37 PM

purely romantic and sensual

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

9 posted 2003-09-14 12:37 PM

beautiful and sad...for her...h

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

10 posted 2003-09-14 02:37 PM

always
always I
see you so
know you
as I know
my heartbeat
in the
darkness

First I was impressed by the ethereal beauty... and then by the heartbreak... both are quite powerfully woven into this superb poem... sheer excellence, my friend.

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