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Timid Lenses |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
These twilight passages of Folded purple rain Misted first, a cool fog Lightly glistening The out stretched arms of solitude Then building in it’s steady Pour, the soothe of natures Rhythmic gathering All is quiet…soft and silent pattering A melody of relaxation, Sweet the leaves in saturation Cool breathes…the fond awakening Of crisper climates Calm, until the lightest stir of Balmy whispers…flutter through my Open window, sweeping eyelets Half-mast thinking A lullaby to send the end Of weary… To the sands of gentle hands Shy are these caresses pausing… Slipped to dream Copyright Kkh 9/13/03 [This message has been edited by ThisDiamond (09-14-2003 03:38 PM).] |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
Calm, until the lightest stir of Balmy whispers…flutter through my Open window, sweeping eyelets loved these lines,, terrific read,, |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
this gives lovely images. And the angel said unto me, "These are the cries of the carrots, the cries of the carrots!" |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very beautiful as always Kathleen... Lovely...lovely. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~ Summer can't be over... |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Kathleen: this brought me to sweet breezy slumber your words consoled me here thank you beautiful writing, as always xxoo |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Your words speak this Sunday. Just beautiful, TD. Patricia |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Beautifully written, so soft and fragile. Such delicate passages... Very well done TD.. |
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