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Jeffrey Carter
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0 posted 2003-09-14 04:23 AM


Roses in September
Floating wildly on the breaze
Emitting a sweet frangrance
That brings me to my knees

They remind me of your lauhgter
And your tender, loving kiss
The way they dance carelessly
So full of happiness

The first time my eyes held you
I knew it was too late
My heart was yours forever
Nothing left to contemplate

As minutes turn to hours
And hours into days
My love for you grows stronger
In so many different ways

So, take this heartfelt poem
And know each word is true
When I say Happy Birthday
My Darling, I Love You!





[This message has been edited by Jeffrey Carter (09-14-2003 04:28 AM).]

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1 posted 2003-09-14 04:27 AM


very nicely written and thought,,

                           

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2 posted 2003-09-14 05:48 AM


A most fortunate lady to
receive such a specially
written Birthday card!

Very nice loving expression
and fine write!

'Tiz feathers that make the bird -
Always remember to keep them fluffed
but, never, EVER ruffle them!

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3 posted 2003-09-14 09:34 AM


Jeffrey~
Not only is it wonderful to see you ...
but with something as beautiful as this ...
makes it a double treat~

Just lovely~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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4 posted 2003-09-14 09:54 AM


Trust me, this poem will undoubtedly be her favorite birthday present!--and one that will keep on giving and giving as she reads it over and over again.

This poem was a pleasure to read--literally and figuratively. It was so lyrical!--and luscious!


EA

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5 posted 2003-09-14 10:25 AM


Such precious words these will be for the one intended. Lovely as the reciever must be.
for you and your intended!

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

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6 posted 2003-09-14 12:39 PM


beautiful!
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7 posted 2003-09-14 10:19 PM


hey baby i love this poem it means the world to me and i love you with all of my heart i will never love anyone as much as i love you and tyvm for this beautiful poem for my birthday love you always your wife tonya
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8 posted 2003-09-14 10:20 PM


love you
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