Open Poetry #28 |
Roses In September |
Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Roses in September Floating wildly on the breaze Emitting a sweet frangrance That brings me to my knees They remind me of your lauhgter And your tender, loving kiss The way they dance carelessly So full of happiness The first time my eyes held you I knew it was too late My heart was yours forever Nothing left to contemplate As minutes turn to hours And hours into days My love for you grows stronger In so many different ways So, take this heartfelt poem And know each word is true When I say Happy Birthday My Darling, I Love You! [This message has been edited by Jeffrey Carter (09-14-2003 04:28 AM).] |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
very nicely written and thought,,
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JilGirl Member
since 2003-05-24
Posts 364Washington |
A most fortunate lady to receive such a specially written Birthday card! Very nice loving expression and fine write! 'Tiz feathers that make the bird - |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Jeffrey~ Not only is it wonderful to see you ... but with something as beautiful as this ... makes it a double treat~ Just lovely~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Trust me, this poem will undoubtedly be her favorite birthday present!--and one that will keep on giving and giving as she reads it over and over again. This poem was a pleasure to read--literally and figuratively. It was so lyrical!--and luscious! EA |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Such precious words these will be for the one intended. Lovely as the reciever must be. for you and your intended! SharaRose @-->-- Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful! |
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jeffsbaby New Member
since 2003-09-14
Posts 2 |
hey baby i love this poem it means the world to me and i love you with all of my heart i will never love anyone as much as i love you and tyvm for this beautiful poem for my birthday love you always your wife tonya |
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jeffsbaby New Member
since 2003-09-14
Posts 2 |
love you |
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