Open Poetry #28 |
At The Dance |
JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
At The Dance For a second I looked into her intense probing eyes and then I knew I didn't stand a chance. For she was already looking around for someone else to share her dance. JamesLee August05 2003 [This message has been edited by JamesMichael (08-06-2003 05:16 AM).] |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
I have known that feeling so many times... well penned... regards sudhir |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Very sad, perhaps you should do the conga then everyone can join in. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown [This message has been edited by Kethry (08-06-2003 08:20 AM).] |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
James - ask her, ask her anyway... BC |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Sudhir, Kethry and Bill for the nice responses. I suppose an important part of life is the ability to know that sometimes you are the object of someones affection and sometimes you are not...James |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
I've known this..over before its started. which, like you say, isn't a bad thing. we don't want to be with someone who doesn't like us the same do we? good to read you james. xx |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
he who hesitates loses,, just move closer to her and be ready for the next dance,, nice write,,, |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Awwww well she just wasn't the right one for you, and you were just spared lots of heartache! SharaRose @-->-- Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
I love your write and your style. Jason |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
God James . . . I know this look too from a man of course LOL I am sorry xxoo |
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