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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2003-09-13 05:16 PM

those tones again,

the dotted spotted ones
ecrus, taupe, beige and bone,

colours of cadavers
usher in the summer's fall,

and the crippled ones
that fawn on feet,

she can offer just a prayer,
as she is torn,

earth mother
and her tethered ones,

that depart now of
her giving arms,

tearfully she mourns the dawn,

destinys children passing on.............

[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (09-15-2003 06:55 PM).]

Sublime Truth
Junior Member

since 2003-09-13

Posts 24
New Denver, B.C., Canada

1 posted 2003-09-13 05:21 PM

Very well written. You've strong sense of imagry and place emotion within your words with skill. Glad I could read it.

Local Rebel
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-21

Posts 5767
Southern Abstentia

2 posted 2003-09-13 05:30 PM

I always enjoy reading you and this is among your best ever.

[This message has been edited by Local Rebel (09-13-2003 05:49 PM).]

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

3 posted 2003-09-13 06:30 PM

Good God, was just staring at the turning leaves yesterday . . .
Michele this is a masterpiece
God, I could feeeeel her crying here

amazing writing truly
xxoo

garysgirl