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Sublime Truth Junior Member
since 2003-09-13
Posts 24New Denver, B.C., Canada |
Hello everyone, Well, I'm new, as you've probably guessed. And I hope that, although I'm beginning to write once more after a long period of time, you all enjoy my peices. And hope that I can give some good feedback as well. Here's my first submission... ~The Sun & The Moon~ Mourn So struck By an alarm The sun has risen And is now gone From my heart Set in stone Darkness, now bidden Love, Never more Mourn Loss of all sight Creating despair instead of might The moon has fallen Dead and waned Never to be risen Never again to be set For full hearts Fall empty In the crowded space A sky So full of stars So full of lies Mourn This passing of my faith Whilst sun is faded And moon Now dead There truly are no more tears, Left to be shed For we all must pass Wax and wane beyond our paths Removing and replacing our ever facadical masks Mourn The sun The moon Our time has past... [This message has been edited by Sublime Truth (09-14-2003 07:33 PM).] |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Welcome to Passions In poetry. I enjoyed your first post and hope to read more of your poems. Please check your e-mail for a special greeting from all of us here at Passions. Ethel/garysgirl Moderator/Passions In Poetry |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Joel, welcome to Passions! I have a feeling you're going to enjoy yourself here. Any questions? Don't hesitate to ask! Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen? |
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Sublime Truth Junior Member
since 2003-09-13
Posts 24New Denver, B.C., Canada |
Thank you both, Ethel and Sunshine. I've a feeling that I will enjoy posting/replying here. Thank you both for the greetings |
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JilGirl Member
since 2003-05-24
Posts 364Washington |
WELCOME to PIP, Joel. Enjoyed your first poetry post. Expressed very well, this is a fine write! Blessings! Shirl 'Tiz feathers that make the bird - |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Welcome Joel! Enjoyed your first post. *smiles* ~Tier |
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Lady Ollyne Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 337East Coast |
"The moon has fallen Dead and waned Never to be risen Never again to be set For full hearts Fall empty In the crowded space A sky So full of stars So full of lies" this Lady loves the above and are Thee in mourn or morn... Ollyne [This message has been edited by Lady Ollyne (09-13-2003 06:39 PM).] |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Joel: Welcome to PIP! What an amazing entrance . . . A sky So full of stars So full of lies YES . . . indeed nice writing xxoo |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (big hugggsssssss) This is a sad but beautiful debut, sweet friend, I send angel hugs your way, and know that the sun will rise again and Lady Luna will never abandon her ballet lessons as she continues to spin through her cycles, all will be forgiven and amended! (smiles) Wow, there's a New Denver, I must be getting old, I dream of seeing more of B.C so much, yay! Welcome to Passions, sweet Joel, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your illuminating poetry, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Joel, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Welcome to Passions in Poetry, Joel - This is a wonderful place to share your work and to enjoy reading others' as well - You'll find a comfy home here. This is a wonderful entree, and I'm looking forward to reading more of your writing...  |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS! Much enjoyed your entrance post. I look forward to seeing more of your work. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~ Summer can't be over... |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
Great job Sublime Truth. I really enjoyed this. Welcome to a wonderful place to let your light,love shine. :-) Ribbit |
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Sublime Truth Junior Member
since 2003-09-13
Posts 24New Denver, B.C., Canada |
Wow...I hadn't expected so many reply's. But, thank you all very much for the very warm welcome, tiss truly appreciated. Again, thank you all, I look forward to reading all of your entries and posting more of my own. - The Sublime (aka Joel) P.S. Hugs back to all sent. P.S.S. At the time I had written the poem, moments before I posted, I had forgotten that, morn and mourn, where near the same appearance, thank you Lady for pointing that out, I think at the time the best meaning is mourn. Thanks again. [This message has been edited by Sublime Truth (09-14-2003 06:39 PM).] |
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