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Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

0 posted 2003-09-13 03:35 PM

sing me sleep
beneath a black star sky
the burn
is much too much
a million reasons
make a
finger itchy
though only
one
would let it go

across the rocks
I paint an ocean red
feathers spiral
in the wind

again

i've never learned
the work of wings
in the gravity
of this
a million things
to spread
me thin
though only
one
could bridge the yawn

[This message has been edited by Aenimal (09-13-2003 03:52 PM).]

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2003-09-13 03:39 PM

1 is the loneliest number

OK, so it's not an original reply

but hey, my brain has been awake for over five hours already today!

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

2 posted 2003-09-13 04:06 PM

Raffie..
this is so dreamy..
*swoon*

I wish I could sleep.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2003-09-13 04:37 PM

cool

icebox
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

4 posted 2003-09-13 04:39 PM

Alas,
poor Icarus!

I knew him, Horatio.

Wind

Member Elite

since 2002-10-12

Posts 2981

5 posted 2003-09-13 06:46 PM

lots of good words in this one... and pretty colors. yes...the colors

1 is better than none.

lol...and 6-5=3...or what was it? 2+2=5?

I should shut up and umm...but this is good and i won't try mathematics..anymore..

And the angel said unto me, "These are the cries of the carrots, the cries of the carrots!"
-Tool

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

6 posted 2003-09-13 06:55 PM

felt the feathers brush my face Raph

freefall gasp a grasp
of feather
wooly cotton comfort
upon those rocks
within the dark
a spark?
or the moon
watching, waning, waxing
she does not lie, no
residing within the insanity
calamity
disturbing reality
of one
brevity of life

(I have No clue where that came from)
This is one beautiful write Raph
*smiling*
xxoo

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

7 posted 2003-09-14 12:38 PM

Always the unexpected, the thing nobody else thought of....excellent stuff!

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Local Rebel
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-21

Posts 5767
Southern Abstentia

8 posted 2003-09-14 04:56 PM

only one can

at least maybe at a time

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

9 posted 2003-09-15 06:59 AM

do you know how talented you are?...i feel your words like rain softly against dry earth and snuggling between the cracks...h

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

10 posted 2003-09-15 10:12 AM

i've never learned
the work of wings
in the gravity
of this
a million things
to spread
me thin
though only
one
could bridge the yawn

very cool... enjoyed!

vandana