Open Poetry #28 |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
sing me sleep beneath a black star sky the burn is much too much a million reasons make a finger itchy though only one would let it go across the rocks I paint an ocean red feathers spiral in the wind again i've never learned the work of wings in the gravity of this a million things to spread me thin though only one could bridge the yawn [This message has been edited by Aenimal (09-13-2003 03:52 PM).] |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
1 is the loneliest number OK, so it's not an original reply but hey, my brain has been awake for over five hours already today! |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Raffie.. this is so dreamy.. *swoon* I wish I could sleep. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
cool |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Alas, poor Icarus! I knew him, Horatio. |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
lots of good words in this one... and pretty colors. yes...the colors 1 is better than none. lol...and 6-5=3...or what was it? 2+2=5? I should shut up and umm...but this is good and i won't try mathematics..anymore.. And the angel said unto me, "These are the cries of the carrots, the cries of the carrots!" |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
felt the feathers brush my face Raph freefall gasp a grasp of feather wooly cotton comfort upon those rocks within the dark a spark? or the moon watching, waning, waxing she does not lie, no residing within the insanity calamity disturbing reality of one brevity of life (I have No clue where that came from) This is one beautiful write Raph *smiling* xxoo |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Always the unexpected, the thing nobody else thought of....excellent stuff! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
only one can at least maybe at a time |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
do you know how talented you are?...i feel your words like rain softly against dry earth and snuggling between the cracks...h |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
i've never learned the work of wings in the gravity of this a million things to spread me thin though only one could bridge the yawn very cool... enjoyed! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
loved it one of your best |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
You are the most annoying man aliiiiive! you give us this, then disappear? where are you idiot? STOP IT!!!! I'm getting abusive, I'm dangerous, I haven't eaten for two days!!!!!!!!!!!!! Instant karma's gonna get you. |
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