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Midnitesun
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0 posted 2003-09-13 11:35 AM


in foulest mood,
i decided to go outside
and kick some ash today

but all i got in return
was a darker smudge mark
on my heart

time to do
a rain dance
and clean up my act

[This message has been edited by Midnitesun (09-13-2003 11:48 AM).]

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Earth Angel
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1 posted 2003-09-13 11:49 AM


~ Sorry for your state of discombobulation~ but you kick ash good!

That was so darn cute--and boy can I ever sense your state of frustration!

The ending was PERFECT! lol


EA


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2 posted 2003-09-13 12:29 PM


thanks for the reply, EA

by way of making a confession (which I rarely do to humans):
'twas not even about me, this time, but the emotional aura I saw from someone else

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3 posted 2003-09-13 01:08 PM


This is clever, cute! I like it, sometimes I feel like kickin' a little ash myself!

~ becky

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4 posted 2003-09-13 01:18 PM


thanks, mornin glory, and if I haven't said this yet, WELCOME to Pips!

[This message has been edited by Midnitesun (09-13-2003 01:18 PM).]

Margherita
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5 posted 2003-09-13 02:00 PM


Love this, dear Kacy!
May I join in the rain dance? Dancing is always healing!
Love, Margherita

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6 posted 2003-09-14 12:08 PM


your title was inspired! and the poem was a perfect complement, as always
wranx
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7 posted 2003-09-14 12:35 PM


Hmmm, quite an ash-kickin' here, Kacy

A glass of wine perhaps to fade the smudge.

Hang in there

Ed

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8 posted 2003-09-14 12:46 PM



ctowen
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9 posted 2003-09-14 03:22 AM


Your burnt tofu dog attitude???

    How much do you wag your tail
    if someone o ffers to play ball!!


             come     and get me!

littlewing
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10 posted 2003-09-14 08:31 AM


is that why I have a bruise on my . . .
(I am up wayy to early to be even
functioning correctly)

Kacy . . . *smile*
yes, I too, always leave with
negativity clinging to me
xxoo

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11 posted 2003-09-14 01:29 PM


dust to dust

inspired Kacey...

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12 posted 2003-09-14 01:55 PM


LOL, sometimes we all have to vent....
thanks for the replies

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13 posted 2003-09-14 02:26 PM




(giggles in delight) Hehehe...I love the way you put it, sweet friend, I usually keep my cool easily, butn when I see someone lying or being dishonest, you want to run for the hills! (giggles) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kacy, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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